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[Report This]Date: 02/02/2008 3:44:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ara, you know that I think you are brilliant. I love your brain, and I love your stories. I'm gonna give you one bit of honest criticism, and it's all about spacing and punctuation! When conversation happens, break the individuals into different paragraphs. When Rogue and Wolverine both speak in the same paragraph, it becomes confusing about who said what. I'll cite the third paragraph from the bottom of this chapter as evidence. Other than that, THANK YOU! I'm loving this story!
Author's Response: Thanks! That's exactly what I have been wondering, should I break chapters or not. You cleared that up. :)
Date: 01/30/2008 7:11:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
Uh oh...I think I know which pic your working up to....Should I start blubbering now? :/
Author's Response: I think I know which pic you think I'm going to choose last. No need to start crying, I'm aiming for a happy ending. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/30/2008 12:55:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
OH My!!!! I can't wait for more, please hurry!!!