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Date: 09/26/2010 10:20:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was outstanding! The girls' personalities were spot on and somehow I just KNEW that bet wouldn't go 'unplayed' for long. Funny and very sexy at the same time. Especially 'I promise and promise and promise and promise and...' Talk about a man after my own, uh, heart...*pant*, *gasp*... --Wendie
Author's Response: The joys of fiction! reality.....well we all know thats a totally different story! Thanks Wendie x
Date: 08/03/2010 1:02:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was not, I repeat NOT, terrible!! It was terrific! And I completely agree with RouDevil...a BIG tease!! A great piece of fluffy fun! More, more!!
Author's Response: This was only the third thing I’d ever written, and my list says I’m now up to 29! I find writing so hard and I still read them wishing I could do much better, yet I find it fun at the same time so I seem to keep going! Glad you enjoyed this one, thanks for taking the time to review I really do appreciate it, it’s nice to know when you’ve got things more on the right side of wrong!
Date: 01/21/2008 10:37:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Terrible isn't the 't' word I would assign to this. I think 'tease' is probably more apt. And it's dialogue only! My favorite format. :) Please (PLEASE) continue.
Author's Response: wow - praise from the queen of humour and holder of my all time fav funny fic (I like a look of agony) today i'm grinning!! thank you x
Date: 01/21/2008 9:39:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
NOT terrible! Three stories means you are just getting started, and keep in mind that you are writing for YOUR enjoyment and no one else! Your dialogue is actually very good - most people struggle to write dialogue-only pieces, me included. Now you just have to work on exposition ie building more of a world around them. It's practise, practise and more practise, and you get better with every story you write. SO KEEP WRITING!
Author's Response: practice it is then! thank you for the confidence boost, it's something that seems to dissapear the older you get! I really appreciate you taking the time to write the above it means a lot x
Date: 01/20/2008 8:56:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
It's not terrible! I like this one. I'm going to go check out your other one's again...
Author's Response: Thank you x rnI'm glad you liked!
[Report This]Date: 01/20/2008 8:08:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
i think i need to go jump back into the shower,goddam i dont think Jub's and roguea re the only one hots in here lol
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed, thanks for taking the time to review i appreciate it x
Date: 01/20/2008 5:55:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is not terrible this is great!
Funny and hottttttt!
I think this needs a sequel or a second chapter with NC-17 rating ;)
Author's Response: Oh how we all love those higher ratings!! Doing it's one thing but writing about it is so much harder (no pun intended!) although my hubby is volunteering to help me with any practice i may need!