What a wonderful story idea! Only when I saw it did I realise that it was about time someone did it, and it is well worthwhile to take a closer look at Logan's early years!
Their voices do not always quite work to my mind, though - there seems to be quite a bit of Wolverine-Scott interaction shining through, and I would think James jr. a little too mature and perhaps even still too "wild" in his ideas in this one - kids are hardest to write, I think.
Great the little details and how you keep it all on an everyday-ish level, with just a hint of past drama shining through. James sen. sounds a very likeable man - and they do say that even if you forget about them, your company in your early years determines quite a bit how you treat others in later life, don't they.

Where does the little girl come from, though? And what role will she play? Looking forward to the updates!

Hope you don't mind me dragging a few spelling rogues into the open:

threw: past tense of throw
to walk THROUGH a door

starring: be the star (e.g. in a movie) staring: looking hard at someone

Author's Response: Thank you! Kids are hard when there's no adult around. Especially James because I wanted him to speak pretty property to sort of highlight the difference between him and Dog. Its the properness that makes him seem mature, I guess. I actually glad there is a bit of Scott-Wolverine in the two of them (especially since the Scott this time is Logan! :D). This is Logan without the labs or Stryker or being a mutant even, he's just a little rich boy.rnOh, I love James senior. I see him as a calm, big guy, you know? Very much the 'leader of the house hold' vibe to him. Especially since the poor guy is basically a single father.rnrnHmm..girls usually lead to trouble :) So we SHALL see...rnrnNo, don't mind a bit. *fully admits error proneness* I'll try to go back through and catch them. Thank!