Reviews For Falling Apart
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Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2008 12:19:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

>“Is that a good idea? To pee right now?” She asked. Logan stopped dead on his tracks.<

ROTFLMAO!!! Oh yeah!! what a line!

Reviewer: DitzyMariposa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2008 1:57:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

*Then twirled around, slightly nauseated look on his face*
Poor guy. Eventually he'll have to decide whats more important: empty your bladder or chance losing...something important. lol loved it

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2008 10:49:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my *LOL*

Logan really shoulnd't take a leak... very important things could fall off...

*ROFLMAO*

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2008 10:08:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

What? *incredulous* Did I just read a "my penis may fall off" joke? hahaha Oh, poor Logan. Thanks, Ara, for the laugh. Loved the line about Marie hugging her cereal bowl to her as well.

Author's Response: I took a one glimpse of that site and it rot my brain. Or what's left of it, anyway... Now Logie's too scared to go to bathroom and I think I may have to lock him outside for the coming night. Either that or chain him down. Can't watch that wobbling and squirming much longer.

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