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Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2014 7:59:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

You know, I'll never understand why the movie studios don't surf fan fiction sites for ideas because I think there's a helluva lot more interesting stories written by great authors here than in the comics!

I said all that to tell you that you have written a powerful story worth millions of dollars instead of just a few lines in a review as an award. Bravo!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2010 9:58:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent? Yes. --Wendie

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2007 4:13:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

That's one of the most fascinating pieces of dialogue I've ever read. Marie gets one word, and the rest sends her emotions all over the place. It's chilling and grief-filled and slightly psychotic, without ever saying anything 'negative'. Amazing, Ara!

Author's Response: Thanks. As I said in AN I'm not sure where this one came from, but I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2007 6:38:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Jeeze. That doesn't make me feel any better! That was sooooooooooooo sad. ;.;
Ya got me, right in that echoing cavity just above my stomach.

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