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Reviewer: DitzyMariposa Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 5:56:26 PM Title: Chapter Eight

whoa. Who knew school could be so sexy? Can't wait to see what happens.

Reviewer: irishekl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 2:17:32 PM Title: Chapter Eight

I'm just waiting for them to be caught! It is so heart pounding, great chapter.

Can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 11:28:56 AM Title: Chapter Seven

Really good.

Scott would have such a fit if he found out Marie is studying more than school work :)

Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: CocoLover Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 12:45:02 AM Title: Chapter Seven

So HOTT!!! I Can NOT wait for more:) please hurry.

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2008 11:57:13 PM Title: Chapter Seven

oh my very hot chapter. I really like this story it's a favorite. Please update soon. Hope it's a happy ending.

Reviewer: SmileyCindy Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2008 11:52:00 PM Title: Chapter One

Oh this story gets better and better. And I'm so sorry about your dog. My puppy Nity recently died about 2 weeks ago so I know the pain you're going through. Long live pets!

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2008 9:46:11 PM Title: Chapter Seven

Wow, very hot.

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2008 5:53:13 PM Title: Chapter Six

that was just the perfect end to the chapter I loved it. can't wait for the next chapters.

Reviewer: Lady Iris Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2008 10:08:47 PM Title: Chapter Five

Yipee! Another chapter! This one was great. I liked Bobby's first appearance and fussing over Kitty. That boy can't seem to get a break these days. The scenes between Logan and Marie were great as always. I loved Logan's shock expression where Marie told him about her mutation. Logan was right to put Scott in his place when he made the comment that she wasn't mutant trash to be discarded. I like Scott a lot, but his arrogance can get the better of him. I wonder what's going to happen with Logan and Marie's relationship now. Update soon.

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2008 7:13:48 PM Title: Chapter Five

And the plot thickens. Lovely!

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2008 11:59:16 AM Title: Chapter Five

wow, very cool chapter. can't wait for the next chapter.


p.s. sorry for you loss.

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2008 12:50:04 AM Title: Chapter Five

So glad you're back and I'm really sorry about your dog.

Reviewer: SmileyCindy Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2008 12:58:52 AM Title: Chapter One

I usually don't comment on stories but this one was too good to pass up! I love the relationship you put for them and I love how your writing just flows ever so beautifully. Wow, what a great story!! More MORE MORE!

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2008 6:25:54 AM Title: Chapter One

This is really enjoyable: your writing is very evocative and paced just beautifully. Excellent characterisation, too: it's unusual to see the characters being so true to the essence of Logan and Marie in an AU context. I'm interested to see what hurdles you throw at them next, as I have a suspicion it won't be all smooth sailing for them!

Reviewer: lizzy13132003 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2007 3:45:57 PM Title: Chapter Four

OMG!!I just read the whole story at once and I am hooked!i love how you portray them and their emotions.So obviously Marie can control her power!I also really like how Logan is a little more integrated in society but yet still a bad-ass!I really hope she tells him about her gift soona nd that they kiss!!Please update soon!!

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2007 11:32:01 PM Title: Chapter Four

Manchester United *squee* Loved this chapter!

Reviewer: Lady Iris Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2007 10:55:48 PM Title: Chapter Four

I love Logan and Marie's attraction to one another. Their chemistry is astounding, like it was in the movies. I even saw an echo from the first movie when she asked him if his claws hurt when they came out and got an answer of every time. I'm glad Marie has healed from her wounds. The idea of Charles being her adoptive father is great. He cares deeply for all people, though he can be a little uncertain about the future at times. Unfortunately, Max could cause a lot of trouble if he finds out about what's happening between Logan and Marie. I hope that doesn't happen, though. Update soon.

Author's Response: i have to admit, i love reading your reviews. they're always so motivating and it makes me glad that you seem to be really enjoying my story. just thought i would say thank you :)

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2007 12:35:44 PM Title: Chapter Four

ohhh great chapter!! Love Logan's preoccupation and attraction to Marie. I like that Marie has control of her skin too. I really need to read the next chapter soon!!

Reviewer: Lady Iris Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2007 7:32:05 PM Title: Chapter Three

Scott's first appearance was great. His reaction to Logan's claws was priceless. I could definitely see it in my mind. Marie needs to get better soon, or I'll honk your nose and give you a wedgie. I'm just kidding on that last part. Update soon.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2007 1:08:06 PM Title: Chapter Three

interesting! I am suprised you didn;t have him touch her. I am actually glad you didn't though. Its more interesting your way! Great chapter! Loved it!

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2007 10:48:44 PM Title: Chapter Three

I hope you post more soon!

Reviewer: Lady Iris Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 12:58:07 PM Title: Chapter Two

Great chapter. Stallworth needs to shut his face. I hope Logan gives him a tongue lashing so painful that he'll be seeing stars. Poor Marie. I hope she'll be okay, but Logan will take care of her. Update soon.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 11:44:31 AM Title: Chapter Two

I love it. I have to say i really hate Stallworth. I hope Logan carves him up but good sometime...Soon. The fight was good. Poor Marie, But logan will save her! I hope! LOL

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2007 10:50:47 AM Title: Chapter Two

I'm really liking this, can't wait for the next udpate.

Reviewer: QueenC86 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2007 8:51:31 PM Title: Chapter One

ohhh i like hope theres more soon

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