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Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2013 8:30:14 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Fantastic! Sorry not to see more of this. Was such a great read, really wanted to know where it would go next. Now all I have are bad guesses :(

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2012 6:13:03 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Just discovered this, thought it was brilliant, intense and very hot, so sorry there wasn't more of it!

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2009 1:56:47 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

oh plz plz plz plz plz a thousand times plz update this right away, i dont come across stories like this that are realyy good and i have to find out. does logan get jealous of max? does rogue get pregnant(pill doesnt always work) do her and logan get caught? ohh plz update asap plz!

Reviewer: Logansmate Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2009 12:50:19 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

When will you update? It's been soooo long and I'm dying.

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2008 12:25:20 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

I hope you update soon!

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2008 10:28:41 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

More please. Don't forget us readers. xXx

Reviewer: Logansmate Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2008 12:58:59 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

God this story is getting good. I just love these kinds of situations when the guy is a little older than the girl, it's some how more interesting. When are you going to update? PLEASE make it SOON!!!!!

Reviewer: Lady Iris Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2008 12:33:51 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Max being a mutant was definitely something I didn't expect. At least I can understand why he treated Marie so horribly. It was expected of him. For him, it has to suck that he had to hide that he was a mutant. If someone does find out about him being Charles's grandnephew, he'll be screwed big time. If Magneto found out, he'd probably use him to get to the X-Men. Anyway, the scene between Logan and Marie was a nice touch. They're going to have to rely on their love for one another to get through the war that is rapidly approaching. Update soon.

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2008 12:22:05 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Even though it was short, loved the scene between Logan and Marie. Wonder what he'd think if he saw Marie coming out of the Janitor's closet with Max? Nice twist with Max being related to Charles; didn't see that one coming. Great work. Can't wait for more.

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