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Reviewer: RandomP Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2008 9:26:25 AM Title: Chapter Four

I bet Logan wants to take Marie on his desk.

Reviewer: lizzy13132003 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2007 3:45:57 PM Title: Chapter Four

OMG!!I just read the whole story at once and I am hooked!i love how you portray them and their emotions.So obviously Marie can control her power!I also really like how Logan is a little more integrated in society but yet still a bad-ass!I really hope she tells him about her gift soona nd that they kiss!!Please update soon!!

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2007 11:32:01 PM Title: Chapter Four

Manchester United *squee* Loved this chapter!

Reviewer: Lady Iris Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2007 10:55:48 PM Title: Chapter Four

I love Logan and Marie's attraction to one another. Their chemistry is astounding, like it was in the movies. I even saw an echo from the first movie when she asked him if his claws hurt when they came out and got an answer of every time. I'm glad Marie has healed from her wounds. The idea of Charles being her adoptive father is great. He cares deeply for all people, though he can be a little uncertain about the future at times. Unfortunately, Max could cause a lot of trouble if he finds out about what's happening between Logan and Marie. I hope that doesn't happen, though. Update soon.

Author's Response: i have to admit, i love reading your reviews. they're always so motivating and it makes me glad that you seem to be really enjoying my story. just thought i would say thank you :)

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2007 12:35:44 PM Title: Chapter Four

ohhh great chapter!! Love Logan's preoccupation and attraction to Marie. I like that Marie has control of her skin too. I really need to read the next chapter soon!!

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