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Reviewer: nyclover Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2009 10:36:35 AM Title: Chapter One

I'd love to see the end of this fic...it's so great, please continue!

Reviewer: Logansmate Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2009 1:38:40 AM Title: Chapter One

I really like this story. Why did you stop?

Reviewer: SmileyCindy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 1:50:58 AM Title: Chapter One

Nice twist! Anyways, I'm glad to hear that you are doing much better. Update soon!!!!

Reviewer: SmileyCindy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 12:28:15 AM Title: Chapter One

Omgosh! I was wondering what happened to ya! Well, I hope for the best in your recovery. Happy healing hun. You'll be in my thoughts :)

And I can't wait for the rest of your wonderful story! But healing is always first!

Reviewer: SmileyCindy Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2008 11:52:00 PM Title: Chapter One

Oh this story gets better and better. And I'm so sorry about your dog. My puppy Nity recently died about 2 weeks ago so I know the pain you're going through. Long live pets!

Reviewer: SmileyCindy Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2008 12:58:52 AM Title: Chapter One

I usually don't comment on stories but this one was too good to pass up! I love the relationship you put for them and I love how your writing just flows ever so beautifully. Wow, what a great story!! More MORE MORE!

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2008 6:25:54 AM Title: Chapter One

This is really enjoyable: your writing is very evocative and paced just beautifully. Excellent characterisation, too: it's unusual to see the characters being so true to the essence of Logan and Marie in an AU context. I'm interested to see what hurdles you throw at them next, as I have a suspicion it won't be all smooth sailing for them!

Reviewer: QueenC86 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2007 8:51:31 PM Title: Chapter One

ohhh i like hope theres more soon

Reviewer: CocoLover Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2007 6:57:25 PM Title: Chapter One

Ok you've got me very excited! please update soon:)

Reviewer: Lady Iris Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2007 5:19:06 PM Title: Chapter One

This is a very nice start to this fic. Everything is set up well. I like the idea of Logan already being a teacher. It's unfortunate Marie has to be bullied by the popular kids. They get on my nerves with acting like they're all that or better than everyone else. I can already see some chemistry between Logan and Marie. It's sweet when Logan tells Marie she can call him by his first name I just hope some idiot doesn't try to cause them trouble. Update soon.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2007 4:19:10 PM Title: Chapter One

Ok this really appeals to the kinky side of my nature! I love it so far! Update soon! There will be smut right? cause I love smut. LOL

Author's Response: haha indeed there will be smut. a little further along in the story though. it'd be a little awkward if they just jumped into bed with one another immediately

Reviewer: miss vixen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2007 8:26:43 AM Title: Chapter One

It looks promising!

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