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Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2016 2:33:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

I expected another chapter to click to...didn't this say it was complete? We're left out here in a whole lot of 'NO PLACE', aren't we?  I really like how this started.....

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2009 11:43:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

You marked this as complete. Is it really? It feels like there is a lot more that could be done with this. It is a good--very good--beginning, but it doesn't tell a whole story. --Wendie

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