Your first story? Really? Well, you sure could have fooled me. And as for the grammar and punctuation and all that hoo-ha -- this was a diary entry, so I doubt that Marie cared much about where one sentence started and another began. I certainly didn't. I understood exactly what she meant from beginning to end. I loved the way you conveyed the emotion and it followed the exact progression Marie said it did; I could tell by the end that she wasn't angry, just resigned to living without him and determined to give him credit where it was due.

This was wonderful and I will be ever grateful to the 'Story of the Moment' feature for unearthing it for me. --Wendie

Good story. Fit perfectly with how X3 went and at the same time openned possibilites for all us Rogan shippers. :) I love the disgruntaled vibe in Rogue's voice, much more realistic than just the 'oh, I pine for you so.'

But the end for me seemed almost cryptic....Makes me wonder why she won't be around to tell him.

Author's Response: There's so many ways that this could go and if i continue i want to make sure i don't kill what i've done if you know what i mean! As far as i'm concerned there is no other ship!! and when reading i love a happy ending so i understand why everyone wants more - but how to get there and more to the point can i do it that is the question!! Thanks so much for the review they are a great confidence boost for a virgin!!!!!!!! x

*speechless*

Terrific story - I can almost see Marie, can hear her writing this down.

I think this screams for a sequel ^_^

Author's Response: i'm so glad you enjoyed, i was nervous putting it on here as its the 1st thing i've ever written, i'm just glad it got a review and a good one at that - so thank you (if i was reading i'd scream sequel too i'm a sucker for a happy ending but this writing lark is harder than reading and i don't want to ruin what i've done so no promises but i might see if i can!)