Reviews For Day One
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Reviewer: Digiella Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2008 2:07:21 AM Title: Day One

"Red." The eyes snapped open, startled. "Clothes?" -haha, wouldn't be suprised if I saw her snapping her fingers infrount of Jean's face. XD I liek.

"There is a war comming" -- OH ho! Xavier! Oh HO! We hear this line comming from so many people throughout the movie's but never form Xavier's mouth, even in the comic's he's more the one 'Let's stop everyone from making a war. Go team Go!' Huh, I like how you included it, really caught my eye that did.

"Scott was--well, being Scott-like. " - An award for perfect description anyone? XD

Y'know the only problem I have with this story so far is that I'm having a hard time sorting out the order that it goes in x_x It feels like "Always Remembered" is the first one and this would be one of the later ones but... x_x Aw crap. I donno, I'm just going to wing it.

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