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Date: 06/13/2011 8:19:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
I hope you update soon. Nice work.
[Report This]Date: 10/22/2007 12:04:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm really interested in where you're takin this, I hope you update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10/21/2007 10:50:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh, yeah! Now that's a damn fine second chapter if ever I read one! Got me on the edge of m'chair, ms! Bring it on!
[Report This]Date: 10/17/2007 2:56:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
interesting. I like it so far.
[Report This]Date: 10/16/2007 10:29:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start to the story. It flowed nicely and has a real hook. I look forward to the next chapters.
Author's Response: thank you , i'm trying, just having a bit of trouble with my ideas at the moment.
[Report This]Date: 10/16/2007 8:04:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like the way this seems to be headed. I love the fics that explore Wolverine and Rogue as almost seperate entities from Logan and Marie. Please keep it coming!
Suggestion, might want to double check your spelling; it's 'shies' not 'shy's'; 'kneels' not 'neals'; 'animal' not 'animale'(although, ani-male might be a good description for Logan!!) Just little stuff like this can be so distracting from a really good fic, and I think you're starting out to write a really good fic!!
Author's Response: Thank you, i redid the spell check and grammer so it should read better now. chapter 2 in almost done. I keep getting a bit sidetracked there though.But it is coming,I promise.
[Report This]Date: 10/16/2007 3:08:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting, I hope you continue! There are a few spelling mistakes that you might want to look at:
It's Rogue, not rouge
And towards the end, speacil should be special.
Author's Response: Thank you, spell check missed them.And beleive me I could use the extra help.I haven't written in a long time now.So I really do thank you.