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Reviewer: lachlanrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2013 10:06:09 PM Title: Lose All The Battles

This is gorgeous. It has just the right tone between the two of them. Realistic affection underscored with something deeper. A brilliant read. I loved the line about did she need anything - blanket- cookie - or could he sit down. That's hilarious!

Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2011 4:26:02 PM Title: Lose All The Battles

AHHHHHH! That was soooooo cute!! ::swoons::

Reviewer: pwaller93 Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2010 11:06:10 AM Title: Lose All The Battles

This was cute, but also intense. I like! :D

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2010 11:03:08 AM Title: Lose All The Battles

OK, I swear that when I opened this story I was only interested in finding out what your hometown was. Had no intention of reading the whole thing. Well, you can see how that worked out. I LOVE the way you write these two characters. Absolutely love it--so real, so organic--nothing forced. You just disappear and let the two of them BE. It's wonderful. --Wendie

Author's Response: Oh, you found Battles, did you? Well, here's a little secret: It's one of my favorites. If I'm allowed to have favorites. Thank you for visiting Brooklyn!

Reviewer: Cuthalion Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2009 8:13:35 AM Title: Lose All The Battles

Beautiful. It's so nice to see them in character - Rogue's not the ever-whining everteen, and he's just the man he should be. Thank you! Cuthalion

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2009 10:38:09 PM Title: Lose All The Battles

somewhat confusing, should have used some sort of symbol for the flashbacks, but otherwise good!

Reviewer: likelandm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 9:21:57 PM Title: Lose All The Battles

Lovely story....truly a pleasure to read. I have my comfort fics (ones I go back to when I want to read something I absolutely love) and this (and its companion) are 2 of them.
I want to comment on so many things that I liked..but will condense it to a couple.
-I love how the complexity of L&M's entire relationship was conveyed in one seemingly simple evening (with so many emotional undercurrents) and ended with a beautiful conclusion.
-The angst was so good it hurt lol...Marie seeing Logan's random girl...of course, she's model-ish, wearing killer shoes..with the added irony of kinda lusting after her herself (thanks to ?inner-Logan)..and the contrast with her own sensible shoes and self..ouch. Glad she got to make a petty comment...there's only so much hurt/anger one can bottle up.
-This story has one of my favorite versions of Marie ever.
-Love Logan having an outside place...seems so right..and the aesthetics of it...also seems so him.
-Logan's "b/c ILY and it was time"...perfect Logan...simple, succinct and with a wealth of meaning.
You have such an elegant and thoughtful way of writing...makes me want to savor each line. Thank you so much.
P.S..I was excited to see your response to a previous post..I'm fairly new to WRFF, and with some stories being years old, I'm not sure which authors still write or respond...so it was really nice to see yours.

Author's Response: Such a lovely and intricate FB deserves both a response and a thank-you. So thank you! This fic, being set in my very own home town, is rather near and dear to my heart, so I'm very pleased that it's still being rediscovered and enjoyed.

Reviewer: litlen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2008 6:19:30 AM Title: Lose All The Battles

yet another great story from you and another that gets 'highly recommended' from me!

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