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Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2007 2:23:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Aw, damn! That was getting so floggin' hot, and then.... *splat*

You're evil. Talented, brilliant, but evil.

Author's Response: Eeeevilll.... Buhahahahaaahaa *snort, cough* Uh... Yes. First there's angst, then the proverbial fly collides to the windshield. Blame Depeche Mode. Their music gots me in to weird mood always.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2007 6:14:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Okay I was so sweet and all good right up to the end then TWIST. I like how your Logan fell so easily though and it was Marie this time thrown' up the old stop sign. But yet I sort of get the feeling that it isn't that she doesn't love him, but that now that she knows he loves her she feels trapped and all that jazz. So, you know, good angst. :)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2007 5:25:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awwww, kinda sad but really good story!

Don't you feel the need for a sequel?

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2007 4:22:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow that was an intense story. I could feel Logan's longing and love thru the entire story. His "She doesn't see me, Not yet." was so sad but at the same time hopeful. It reminded me of a line frome the song Invisable man. The line was "How can she free me if she can't even see me?" To me it was kind of the same emotion. Wanting to be seen and loved yet having the person you want most not really seeing you at all. The ending was really sad as well but for some reason left me with hope for them to work things out and come out a couple. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks. :)

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2007 3:46:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, ara! I hope you've got a recipe for Welsh rarebit or something for that damnable plot bunny!! Love the same opening line for each segment, then the update. 'She still doesn't see me...' but things have changed just a bit from last time! Neat way to tell a story, really liked it!

Author's Response: This bunny was easy to please. Wobbled off as soon as I wrote this. :)

Reviewer: Cataglottisme Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2007 2:06:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Once again, you're raising interesting questions.
You grab a 'done to death/ fandom-meme' storyline,turn it upside down, and then spun it all around (in a completely unexpected way). I *love* it.

And about the writing technique, I love the anaphoric use of : "She doesn't see me. Not yet.", it's a real delight to read such a nicely crafted text... And it helps buidling the tension...
Great job as usual X3

Author's Response: I was listening to Depeche Mode's "It's No Good" when this came to my mind. If you have seen the vid for that song, you know where this came from. Thanks for the fb. Appreciated, as always. :)

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