The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
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Really nice. I'm not surprise that once they got going, the heat of the moment washed over them. Rogue being unable to touch, and Logan's inablility to touch her, would drive them in a rush to feel everything. Great work.
For a first attempt, this really has some spectacular imagery.
In particular, I liked: Then, suddenly, he was crushing her hard against him, his kisses bruising in their power, wild in their unleashed urgency.
and: Her tongue met his in a jumbled thrust-and-parry that sent hot, wet waves surging through her body.
Overall, the scene didn't quite set me on fire like some others have, but it was very sweet and tender and well-written. --Wendie