Uh no wonder Logan's got a headache.

ok does Logan still love Marie? Does Marie still love Logan? Will they ever work out their differences? These are the things I need to know. Keep up the good work and update soon!!!

Author's Response: Adult, angst, dark. Don't expect a happy ending.

I had a feeling that things were steering that way. I was giddy with expectation, because if there's one thing you're good at, it's pulling stuff like this out of your sleeves.
The Nolan factor, right? Right.
The reader knows it's going to be ugly, but he/she never knows *which* kind of Ugly is actually going to show up.
And when it comes out of nowhere, and slams into your brain so hard that you *actually* sit there reeling from the aftershock long after finishing the chapter? Gods, it's so, so, so good. *Braingasm*
I want more braingasms like these, lol. I'm a needy bitch and I'm afraid you're going to be stuck with me for a long time. I just can't get tired of your style.
Where do you pull this style from, woman? Seriously, you've got a gift. And I'm not saying that in a “Oh, u're good! Hmm, btw update soon, much?” kind of way.
I mean it, really. Uuurh, I'm gushing again. But this story does all kinds of funny things to my brain. It's like reading 'War' all-over again, or watching Memento for the first time.

PS: And I really, really love your Marie at 40. You've done a number on her in this one, and you know what? I'm loving the complexity of it. And the 'Bitch-from-Hell' part is a perfect counterweight to Logan's madness/moodiness/Logan-ness. How do you manage? How is it that these two are completely different in each of your fics, and yet they always, ALWAYS, are complementary? You keep surprising me.

Author's Response: I have split-personality disorder. :) Sorry, bad joke. Very bad. shouldn't joke about those things. actually, when I start writing I just kind of imagine myself in Logan's shoes and go from there. Half of the time I spend on my balcony smoking and trying to come up with right words, half of the time I spend iffing and fearing that nobody will understand a single thing from the mess I have managed to make.

I'd really like to smack some sense into pissed off Marie.

Twelve twelve TWELVE!

Those sick fuckers!

Ok so Marie is gonna kill Logan later... after they find out the truth. Oh well a lot of things can happen till 'later'.

Ok so Marie stayed Marie for a week...

Author's Response: Marie is Marie. It's just her view on logan that's changing. And the level of her hostility.

I fucking love your style so fucking much, I keep adding random expletives everywhere. fuck.
I know you must be tired with the fanish devotion, but really, your works are so, so great to me, it's just... uurh, I can't go on reading without letting you know that I love what you do with Logan.
Yeah, I know, that's not construtive reviewing. But fuck, I love your style.

Author's Response: Constructive? Heck, I'm just glad to get any rewiews at all. It's good to know that people find the time to read these scribblings. ;)

hehehe devilish mind yours

i feel like i shouldn't love your logan but i do. he's so violent and grumpy and misanthropic and sometimes whiny but i love it. all. because when something good happens he's so ready and grateful and alive and vital and he'll snatch it and gulp it down and give back more than he's able. makes me want to smother him with loving just to see that smile. (maybe that doesn't make sense but i'm not editing it. heh)

love the relationships you write for logan and his daughters, but it seems every time that happens, marie is eiher evil or mad (or dead first, mad later). it's like he only gets that one uncomplicated relationship in his life. poor logie.

Author's Response: There wouldn't be much to write about if everything worked out well from the beginning. Not for me at least. :)

wow I really like this take on things can't wait for an update.

/ de-lurking briefly /
ooooh, I like where this is going... Yum!