This is like watching one of the many dramatizations of "Titanic" or "pearl Harbor" ... you keep seeing them make mistake after mistake, and you want to yell @ them to open their eyes ... argh!

Please don't tell me they're going to find Marie dying! LOgan's going to go completely insane!

So far, I'm having a thoroughly enjoyable time with this story. I guess I'm wishing you'd have spent just a little more time developing the Valerie/Logan dynamic, just so that we can get a feel for what their relationship is like, and know his justification for falling in love with her. So far she's kind of a 2D "warm body" sort of fill-in. I wish I knew more about her, and I have a feeling she's about to be shoved into the background as the plot unfolds. Seems like she missed the chance to shine as a character!

Please update soon!