seems like their planning wasn't the greatest. And I must say, to be totally honest, this isn't your best writing. Either you struggle with action sequences in general, or you were in a hurry to get this out and didn't spend much time editing. But it advanced the plot to where it needed to be, and I'm sure the major part of the story will be focused on the aftermath of these events, and all the angsting and character drama you're so good @