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Reviewer: Ashnan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2016 10:28:14 AM Title: Chapter 16

Is the finished version of this posted anywhere?

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2012 3:34:42 PM Title: Chapter 16

Very interesting. I hope you continue. I'm curious to see how things work out. I have enjoyed your writing style. :)

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2011 8:57:16 PM Title: Chapter 16

woooohooooo, yes I love this fic. I can't wait to see how you end this soon, I hope, pretty please with a cherry on top!!!!! Honestly I'm just happy your back and I hope I get to read the ending to this ;)

Reviewer: Ashnan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 11:42:18 PM Title: Chapter 16

Was thrilled to see that this is being updated again. Just, uh, not so long between updates this time. You trying to kill us?

Reviewer: Shuttlelauncher Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 11:40:52 AM Title: Chapter 16

I really like this story...please keep it up!

Reviewer: QueenC86 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 5:12:56 AM Title: Chapter 16

OMG I cant believe your back *does happy dance around the room* please dont leave it too long to up date the next chapter.

Reviewer: Capt_Mackenzie Signed half star [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2010 11:20:55 PM Title: Chapter 15

argh! And what a witch this woman is! I think I'm starting to hate her.

...and I'm gonna absolutely *haunt* you if you don't update! I *knew* you were gonna do this to us! I think I should start a picket line, hang up a cheesy cardboard sign and chant: WE WANT UPDATES NOW!

Reviewer: Capt_Mackenzie Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2010 11:17:52 PM Title: Chapter 14

Charlie Xavier is an idiot sometimes.

Poor Marie. After all this hell she's gone through ... her mate has abandoned her, and what's worse, MARRIED a usurper when he never even bothered to marry HER for 5 years!!

She's going to be devastated.

So is Logan.

And *I'M* going to be devastated if, through all your devious author's tricks and delaying tactics, I find that the next chapter ends before Logan even re-enters the story and sees her!

If you abandoned this story and left us hanging without even the long-awaited payoff of getting to watch Marie and Logan's reunion ... wow. I'm gonna be SO disappointed.

Reviewer: Capt_Mackenzie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2010 11:13:51 PM Title: Chapter 13

So is Kayla going to have skin-based powers like her mother? And are Jean's flashbacks related to her own mutation (which shouldn't really have anything to do with precognition, right?) ... OR, are they a result of Jean's mutation interacting with Kayla's?? You've got me thinking!

Logan's conviction in front of Kayla that Marie must be dead, and that "habit" of "erasing" her name ... WOW! *Please*, girl, explain that at some point. I'd really like to know how he looks back at his life with her; is he resentful toward Marie? I think you have imagined something going on in his head that I haven't anticipated, and I'd love to take a peek!

...and listen: I can see the writing on the wall, here. I've found this story for the first time, but it's been 3 years since you updated and with only 2 more chapters to go, I just know you're going to leave the story off at a doozy of a cliffhanger that's gonna leave ME with a boatload of frustration!!

I KNOW that I read in your note at hte beginning of hte story that you had TWENTY-THREE chapters ALREADY typed out before you even finished posting!! So where are all the missing chapters?

PLEASE, PLEASE PLEASE --- could you have mercy, and take the time to go back in your old computer files and retrieve those old chapters, and post them?? Even if the story's still unfinished, at least we'd have that to read. And if you can't do THAT, can you @ least post an outline of how you *would have* finished the story -- whatever it was you had planned in your mind. Just an outline. Surely that would only take an hour of one day out of your life!! I *have* to know how this story ends! (can you tell I'm desperate?)

Reviewer: Capt_Mackenzie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2010 11:05:08 PM Title: Chapter 7

well done! Brilliant! ;) You do a good job of showing Logan's character under stress.

Reviewer: Capt_Mackenzie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2010 11:04:15 PM Title: Chapter 8

Heartbreaking! VEry sweetly written.

Reviewer: Capt_Mackenzie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2010 11:03:31 PM Title: Chapter 9

oh, no! Is he going to figure it out before Val pushes her out of the picture entirely??

Well done. Though, yes, I wish there had been maybe one more in-between chapter to show Logan "getting over" Marie enough to let in another woman.

Reviewer: Capt_Mackenzie Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2010 11:01:52 PM Title: Chapter 12

This is like watching one of the many dramatizations of "Titanic" or "pearl Harbor" ... you keep seeing them make mistake after mistake, and you want to yell @ them to open their eyes ... argh!

Please don't tell me they're going to find Marie dying! LOgan's going to go completely insane!

So far, I'm having a thoroughly enjoyable time with this story. I guess I'm wishing you'd have spent just a little more time developing the Valerie/Logan dynamic, just so that we can get a feel for what their relationship is like, and know his justification for falling in love with her. So far she's kind of a 2D "warm body" sort of fill-in. I wish I knew more about her, and I have a feeling she's about to be shoved into the background as the plot unfolds. Seems like she missed the chance to shine as a character!

Reviewer: Capt_Mackenzie Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2010 10:56:22 PM Title: Chapter 4

seems like their planning wasn't the greatest. And I must say, to be totally honest, this isn't your best writing. Either you struggle with action sequences in general, or you were in a hurry to get this out and didn't spend much time editing. But it advanced the plot to where it needed to be, and I'm sure the major part of the story will be focused on the aftermath of these events, and all the angsting and character drama you're so good @

Reviewer: Capt_Mackenzie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2010 10:53:37 PM Title: Chapter 2

oh, dear ... and one of them is going to be captured or overwise terribly traumatized, right? Yep, I can see this freight train coming (i love stories like this. and you write Logan's little family dynamics so well. it's adorable!)

Reviewer: freelke Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 3:09:12 PM Title: Chapter 15

ahhh please continue this story. It's such a great story with such a nice style! I need more chapters :)

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 2:25:44 PM Title: Chapter 15

Hi, great story so far. I'm just wondering,has it stalled? Or are there still more chapters to come?

Reviewer: Logansmate Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2009 3:54:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like this story. I've always been interested in the present girlfriends being cruel and the previous girlfriends trying to be back with the guy. Update soon please!

Reviewer: anna_k Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2008 5:04:22 PM Title: Chapter 15

I hate Valerie! Please don't let her win!
Can't wait for read more

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2008 4:47:47 AM Title: Chapter 15

I hope Valerie will get what she deserves!

Reviewer: Shuga Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2008 4:50:03 AM Title: Chapter 15

Ohhhhhhhhhhh! Scandal! cant wait to read on. PLEASE tell me he'l dump Val!!!!

Reviewer: perfect star Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 9:03:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

please please please write more im on the edge of my seat logan has to get back with marie...and kayla omg!
please dnt make a horrible twist like val gettin pregnant or sumat, not that wud be heart breaking!

Reviewer: QueenC86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2008 3:13:35 PM Title: Chapter 15

ohhhhhh i knew it i knew it Val has got to have something to do with Rogue going missing and must know shes back,

cant wait for more

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2008 1:22:08 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh, waiting for that other shoe to drop! Luscious. I was so waiting for a reason to hate Val, and there ya go.

Reviewer: Browneyedgrrl Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2008 11:01:11 PM Title: Chapter 15

Bad, bad woman. That was way too short, after so long, long, long wait.:(
Give us more, please (insert here puppy's eyes).
The story is so interesting that that makes difficult the wait.

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