OH!! I like it! I like it!! Fav line.....“Hey old man, the least you could do is wait for your wife!”
Nice to know the passage of time hasn't dulled the sharpness of their wit!

"Even after two centuries, after countless lifetimes spent together this ritual was still the same. It solidified their union, washed away all the old anger, the old regrets, and cleansed the wounds of words spoken in rage."

Does this indicate that the visit to the school/mansion is some sort of new beginning point? A kind of 'every 75 years we do this' ritual? OR, is her question about making it work again supposed to infer that they've been apart for a while?

Either way, they're together and in love in the end!! What more could a little shipper ask for!?!



Author's Response: It's a ritual that they usually do every couple of years. Something that they do to start fresh. Being ageless insults and injuries to each other's hearts is bound to happen and this way they can heal, can wash away their pain and start all over again with a clean slate. Glad you liked the story!

Oh, break my heart why don't you? That was just beautiful. Wonderful writing again, just wonderful.