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Date: 01/11/2007 2:01:57 PM Title: Chapter 30

And still he doesn't understand. The professor is supposed to be so smart yet he still doesn't get it.

Great Job! I loved the chapter!

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Date: 01/11/2007 1:30:22 PM Title: Chapter 30

I'm gonna go and find someone to cuddle with - dark chapter.

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Date: 01/09/2007 8:38:09 AM Title: Chapter 29

Ok those x-men are dummer than dirt! Who the F*ck do they think they are dealing with. They need to pull their heads out of their buts and take a good look at what they created!!!

Awesome chapter. I love this story!

Author's Response: That's one way of putting it. They definitely need to see what they've missed.

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Date: 01/09/2007 5:30:21 AM Title: Chapter 29

***“So can you exploit those memories? Find a weakness? A loophole?”

Uh oh that weakness should not be looked at, not be explored.

I can't believe that the X-Men are so stupid... they really don't get it, do they?

Oh and I'm starting to want to do very bad things to Jean... not that it's anything new ;)

Author's Response: Oh I think she's gonna figure that out soon... bad things are coming her way with all the subtlety of a freight train!

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Date: 01/07/2007 8:12:20 PM Title: Chapter 28

i love the way the story draws you in and keeps you coming back for more.

speaking of more... pleasepleaseplease! don't keep me waiting! a story this finely crafted is begging to be read!

Author's Response: Updates will be coming soon! I'm glad that you're enjoying this story!

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Date: 01/06/2007 10:55:39 AM Title: Chapter 28

Ohhh Great updates!!! Love that Scott seems to be on board with Frankenstein! And I really loved them beating up the x-men. This story is fun yet intense. Love it!! Can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it.

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Date: 01/05/2007 4:17:26 PM Title: Chapter 28

***Just used up discarded pieces of filth the army should have killed. Do you get to pick which one you get to fuck?”

The Bobbster didn't say that, did he?! *growls loudly*


Author's Response: Yeah, he did but he's sooo gonna regret it. thanks for the feedback!

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Date: 01/05/2007 4:11:18 PM Title: Chapter 27

*growls*

I wanna kill those guards all over again... painfully!

Author's Response: Slowly, very, very slowy is the way to do it! Thanks so much for your feedback - its always appreciated

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Date: 01/04/2007 7:13:59 PM Title: Chapter 26

That poor desk... I'm shocked... or not *giggles*

Author's Response: I know, poor Tank traumatized over such a thing Glad you're enjoying the story!

Author's Response: I know, poor Tank traumatized over such a thing Glad you're enjoying the story!

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Date: 01/03/2007 10:54:26 AM Title: Chapter 23

Holy crap! Kitty and Scotty doing the nasty NOW?? LOL thats good! Love that scott is so willing! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you, Scott just seemed like he needed to be treated a bit better - after all he had protested! Glad you liked it

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Date: 01/03/2007 10:50:51 AM Title: Chapter 22

Aww Nice to see Kitty opening up to Rogue. Love that Logan is there to make sure they are ok too! Great chapter!

Author's Response: I think it was harder on Kitty than anyone because she always seems so sheltered. Thanks so much for the feedback, its very much appreciated.

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Date: 01/03/2007 10:48:48 AM Title: Chapter 21

ROTFL!!!

"I find myself wanting a real woman, not an imitation."

Go Scott. i really like him in this right now!


Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying Scott - he deserves someone so much better than Jean

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Date: 01/03/2007 10:46:24 AM Title: Chapter 20

Just to three words. You Go Logan!!

Hehe. Great chapter!!! Second blood is just as sweet!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, glad you're enjoying the story.

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Date: 01/03/2007 10:32:38 AM Title: Chapter 19

You have no idea how much I loved that line

"Kitty drew first blood, now it’s his turn and he’s not going to be so nice about it,” Rogue replied softly seriously."

Great Line!!!

Author's Response: Rogue is a bit more hard nosed in this one than I usually write her but then she's suffered to. Thanks for the feedback its very much appreciated!

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Date: 01/03/2007 10:28:13 AM Title: Chapter 18

Aww poor rogue. i knew from the previous chapters that Rogue had been sexually molested but Poor girl. Loved Logan's reaction! I love how Kitty and Jubes and Rogue are all sticking together and how Logan and Tank are sticking by them! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Wasn't sure if anyone would pick up on that or not but you did! Thanks for the feedback glad you're enjoying the story!

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Date: 01/03/2007 10:26:16 AM Title: Chapter 17

OK Scotts back.. Wonder how long he will stay. And jean and Bobby? that ewww! but hey I wouldn't put it past her! Another great chapter.

Author's Response: I figure they deserve each other hehehe. Thanks!

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Date: 01/03/2007 10:19:33 AM Title: Chapter 16

Oh they are moving out. Can't say as I blame them. I really like helen. Is so odd that she is Logan's mother though. But love it anyway. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah, figured Logan deserved a glimpse into his past...without the military. Glad you're liking the story!

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Date: 01/03/2007 10:12:26 AM Title: Chapter 15

Ohhh Interesting! Scott getting a chip. And aww poor rogue. I knew they did something to her other then the claws! Great chapter. very emotional.

Author's Response: Glad that you're liking the story, and the direction its going in.

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Date: 01/03/2007 10:09:44 AM Title: Chapter 14

Ohhh Love Scott blushing! LOL New he would like it! LOL Love Logan saying he was with frankenstein and not with the faction. Glad that Kitty confided in Logan as well. Again Awesome chapter!

Author's Response: Logan sure is good for confiding in. And Scott's cute when he's blushing! glad you're enjoying this story!

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Date: 01/03/2007 10:07:37 AM Title: Chapter 13

Wow this is intense. But somehow i think if they do have sex Scott will be willing. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Asstuteness is your gift I guess. I'm sure they'll enjoy themselves as well.

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Date: 01/03/2007 10:05:55 AM Title: Chapter 12

OMG Poor Kitty! That is horrible what they did to her!!! I have to say though I feel really bad for scott.

Author's Response: Thanks so much.

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Date: 01/03/2007 10:04:16 AM Title: Chapter 24

holy crap that was an intense This story rocks! One of my fovorites so far!!! I can't wait for more. update soon!!!

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it.

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Date: 01/03/2007 5:36:58 AM Title: Chapter 24

*grins like a loony* So many chapters.

Ewww Jean and Bobby ewww.

Author's Response: It gets worse hehehe- but that's still to come in my next updates!

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Date: 01/03/2007 4:48:59 AM Title: Chapter 13

*winces* Ouchy...

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