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Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2007 8:38:09 AM Title: Chapter 29

Ok those x-men are dummer than dirt! Who the F*ck do they think they are dealing with. They need to pull their heads out of their buts and take a good look at what they created!!!

Awesome chapter. I love this story!

Author's Response: That's one way of putting it. They definitely need to see what they've missed.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2007 5:30:21 AM Title: Chapter 29

***“So can you exploit those memories? Find a weakness? A loophole?”

Uh oh that weakness should not be looked at, not be explored.

I can't believe that the X-Men are so stupid... they really don't get it, do they?

Oh and I'm starting to want to do very bad things to Jean... not that it's anything new ;)

Author's Response: Oh I think she's gonna figure that out soon... bad things are coming her way with all the subtlety of a freight train!

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