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OH YEAH!!! Who hoo!! *happy sigh* Anyone for a cigarette? Bravo!
Author's Response: Though I'm in no way couraging people to smoke, I must admit that several coffin nails were consumed while writing this series. As were lollypops, chocolate and ice cream as well. ;)
Well good morning to me ^_^
Gonna have to wake up my guy now ;)
My favorite chapters were the first and this last one. In the first one, I felt so pervy, so dirty along with Logan in a good way. (The last line about the lollipop was *inspired* - perfect.) There was such innocence to it, because it was nearly unplanned, the beginning, almost going nowhere. And then I felt...I'm not sure...increasingly uneasy as I suspected Marie became more complicit. And somehow that felt sicker and dirtier and addictive - the moment when Marie wipes the chocolate off Logan's lips and tastes him and chocolate. It felt too cavity sweet and wrong and climbing darker as Marie and Bobby slowly spiraled into greater wrongness, which somehow still didn't make Marie and Logan *right*.
So I love that you brought it back to this moment, reliving all of his old fantasies, finding Marie underneath all the sweetness and the teasing, and this chapter is just so...guh!...wuh?...please, God, yes! Desire fulfilled and an undercurrent of proud need, I think. They both love wanting each other this much. Exploding passion. Release.
Wow! You are so good at these, Ara. Reminds me of Cravings, but I think...yes, indeed, I do like this more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I wouldn't talk about this one and Cravings in the same sentence, though... :)
Well,.....uh......I mean......that was really,...um, really......*ahem*.....what I mean to say is..............WOW!!!
Ara, you have quite a talent for anticipation, expectation, dragging things out and, I think, foreplay in general!!! I feel almost sorry for your significant other!!
Author's Response: Do you really think I'd be sitting on this computer 24-7 if I could do even half of the things I'm making Logan and Marie do? But thanks. :)
“Enough of these games… Lets go home,”
Fer cryin' out loud!! I should say so!!!
Oh, ara! Not only are being not very nice to Logan, do you have any idea what you're doing to us hopeless romantic shippers?? *shudders*
uhhh..... DAMN! that was HOT. Very passionate and intense. I loved it. (Now I must go pay my Boyfriend a visit. LOL)
*Gah*..falls over...*thud*, so damn HOT, and for a sticky night like this, jus' perfect.
how do u say de lic ous?
oh man what I wouldn't give to be Marie in this chapter. I am just getting sweaty just thinking about it. Can't wait till they get home! LOL Great chapter!!!
OMG I've loving the smut, more please.
*drools*
God damn! That is hot!!! I love this series. Very sensual and filled with longing and desire. Can't wait for the next scorching chapter!!!
Author's Response: Already under work. Will be posting it as soon as it's finished. I try to finish this whole series on one sitting to stay in the right mood for writing it.
:O~
Gah, their dentist must love them! Hot. Really hot. I don't even care if they have sex, I seriously doubt the intensity could get any stronger. Again, :O~
Author's Response: They will have sex. After all this they will have sex even if it kills me.