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Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2010 2:13:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

I don't know when the last time was you looked at this, but you might want to check the fourth paragraph from the bottom. Something tells me Rogue wasn't reclining on her eyebrows -- unless there's something about her mutation that no one has mentioned yet.

That aside, however, this was a clever bit of smut. What would a girl who's been untouchable do for fun if she were suddenly touchable? Have tons of meaningless, anonymous sex, of course. And hope a certain feral never finds out... --Wendie

Reviewer: Shuga Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 11:57:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well written and id love to see what happens and how Rogue got there.

Author's Response: Thank you. :) And I'd love to show you too but I shot that bunny as soon as I finished writing it. Twice. :)

Reviewer: aranenumenesse Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2007 5:42:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Sorry. I laughed. You probably meant this to be taken seriously, but I couldn't help it. You see, at first I thought she was in bed with Logan, and having read Astyala's Osmosis-stories earlier I was in the mood for some fun at Logan's expence. But nevertheless, having read this second time, this is kind of dark, too. And raises a million questions. Is she a slut? Has something happened to Logan? Has Logan done something and she's seeking revenge? Questions, questions... But I liked this.

Author's Response: No, please, laugh away. The Logan confusion was suppose to happen in the beginning. But the poor fellow gets more and more pathetic as the story goes. And I've become rather fond of him. All good questions. :) Except for, I'm pretty sure she's a slut. Thanks.

Reviewer: sharonmjl47 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2007 3:25:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

OMG She really is a slut!! But Logan might like the white trash whore part of her as well.

“Ah hope ya neva find out, sugah.”

OOooo Bitch!!

Follow up?? You know you want to!!

Author's Response: Oh I'm sure he would. No follow up, sorry. But thanks for the feedback. :)

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2007 2:25:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

Gah, indeed! That was definitely an 'atmospheric' piece - made me feel dirty just reading it. lol! And I agree - I'd love to know what happens next/later. *eyebrow*

Author's Response: Uh, sure. They live happily ever after. I love my little asthma boy. I felt so bad for him as I was writing it. Oh well, at least he got some! Thanks for the feedback! :D

Reviewer: Ashnan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2007 1:37:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

Holy crap! What a bunny! This can't be a quick one-shot. Nuh-uh. Can't do that to us.

Author's Response: ...Umm...sorry. But it's definitely a one-shot. This one barely got out so a second is highly unlikely. Sorry. :)

Reviewer: Aquarius Angel Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2007 1:37:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

the ending sentence is ingenious!!!

Author's Response: Why thank you! This was one of those fic where the ending game first and it just went from there. :)

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