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Reviewer: manda-dee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2009 3:09:25 AM Title: What I know

All right now, first things first.

This is actually surprisingly good- mind you I was only surprised because the spacing is all wrong. when you aren't logged in go online and read the story you posted, see the way the lines have no spacing in between them? Well you can fix that and you should really work on it because its awfully distracting.

Now, as I said this is a good story. I like your Rogue, little hard to swallow getting a Psychology degree, and a Med. degree in two years.... that's 22 years of knowledge for the normal person in two years for Marie... it really wouldn't matter how smart she was there isn't enough hours in the day to do that, it would even be slightly more believable if you made it a three year time period because it hasn't go to do with her being that smart or that dumb but with her being able to accomplish that much in such a short time.

Also, clearly you aren't using the comic books as a reference for Logan's background. I actually like the idea of Scottish Logan, then again I've always loved accent hearty Hugh Jackman, all Aussie and fantastic as he is. I think it's also a little far fetched having Logan be in Scotland in the time before it was called "Scotland" also there's a slight historical error- I think- because Scotland before it was called Scotland didn't have a whole lot to do with blue paint and be careful with that thread because before Scotland was Scotland, chronologically speaking it was the Middle Ages, I believe, which would man circa 1200's and that would make Logan upwards of 800 years old.

Okay, I've said my peace but I want you to know I'm not flaming you at all here, just letting you know that this is a really good story and I hope to read more of it, just properly spaced out next chapter-hopefully!

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2007 8:21:01 PM Title: What I know

I really liked the first two chapters will. I hope there will be more think this is a really good story.

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