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Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 5:16:39 PM Title: Chapter 20

What. the. hell?!

hahahahaha!! I should have known I'd come back and Ara's story would bear no resemblance to what had gone before. New bad guys. More blood and guts, very visceral, visual writing. *feels sick* You always manage to make these scenes so real to me. Am soooo glad I am not Logan.

And yet - there's the thread in there that hints at the continuing storyline. I feel so bad for Marie. And Logan. Yet again, he wasn't really 'there' when it happened, and it's conception was a violation - for both. So I was shocked but I can understand this: "How to explain her why he wasn’t going to be able to tolerate the small, fragile life she was carrying in her womb". And yet I wonder - if that's *really* what will happen next?

Author's Response: Logie wanted a little bloodplay and action. It's hard to say no when he keeps threatening to gut my cat if I don't write what he asks for. Well, it has been quite a while. They have gotten yet to another point in their lives. Truth to be told, *I* have no idea of what's going to happen next. Logie decided to take some time off from this one, not for long, and I have something new under my pen (or keyboard?) right now. Short story which I'm planning to finish before I continue this one. New chappies to the War I have probably at the end of this week.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2007 4:52:58 AM Title: Chapter 20

Okay, well, I'm not hungry anymore, thats for sure. And this Logan has some serious children issues! Damn, and I thought I felt bad for Sam, this kid was just conceived and already he's out for it!

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