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[Report This]Date: 06/20/2007 4:21:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
Gawd! *thud!*
Author's Response: *Uh... I'm not really that big of a bastard ara's trying to make me be. I'm not. I promise to smack some sense in to her. We'll get this circus on the road again. I promise.*
Logie!
*No. Go. Scoot. I'm writing the next chapter. I'm getting tired of all the shouting and fighting.*
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2007 1:40:11 AM Title: Chapter 11
Damn, they're gonna be so tired from fighting each other he's not going to be able to fight in the 'other' war. And he is aware that he's whining again, right? Should change his name to Logan 'woe is me' Wolverine. It's like he can't decide if he is a man or a mouse, a very drama- queen-ish mouse. So she's a little bit scared of him when it comes to a 'special' situation. He's a lot more scared of himself than she ever was. I think he needs Sam. Sam challenges him, makes him flare that big ole chest of his out and prove he's the right man for Marie. He needs the matcho competition otherwise he's in his own head too much.
Author's Response: You know, you may be right about that one. About Logan needing another alpha to challenge him to keep him out of wallowing self-pity and thinking how he's no good. He needs that extra kick he gets when he gets to bully around people as big and mean as him.
Date: 06/19/2007 5:08:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
“And if you want to stay here, I’m sure that… I’m sure that they can find something for you to do…” He clamped a palm over his mouth and squeezed his eyes shut. His heart was working on overtime, pounding at his temples. There was something wet flowing down his cheeks.
“Logan! Look at me!”
“No.”
“Logan!”
“No. I’ll go and pack my things. I’ll be out of here soon. Don’t worry…” He fumbled his way out of the kitchen blindly. He couldn’t look at her. If he was ever going to leave from here, he had to do it now.
ARA!!! I was nearly crying out of sympathy for this. Look at him! You made him CRY! Marie, stop him!
I think maybe they don't really have a problem. They just love each other very much, sometimes too much and too selflessly and doubtfully, and they need to say it more often. Trust will come from feeling more security; they're everything to each other. They're all they've got.
*mumbles* and sam...
*bawls* I don't know! *sniffles* Fix it! Please?
Author's Response: Fix it? What the heck do you think I'm trying to do? I shouldn't let those two get in to a conversation. Ever. I should just keep them locked up in the bedroom. I shouldn't even give them clothes to wear. But hey, I think it's getting better. I have a good feeeling about the next chapter.