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Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2007 4:43:08 AM Title: Chapter 7

Evil cliffhanger!

*runs off to read the next chaper*

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2007 9:48:00 PM Title: Chapter 7

“Why? Gonna give me a smack for it?”

Ha! I nearly choked reading that line! Your interaction between these two is brilliant!

“Show me.” He turned to see her pink face was completely serious. “Show me what you’d be like. I want it. I want to know.”

*Swoon* Oh man, I cannot wait for the next update!!!!

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2007 2:47:50 AM Title: Chapter 7

Gods! This is so intense, it almost made me tired to read it. I think I need a strong drink.

Ahhh, tequila... *thud*

Reviewer: Vickie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2007 3:31:06 PM Title: Chapter 7

Great Chapter, looking foward to more hoping for a happy ending.

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2007 12:26:44 PM Title: Chapter 7

That was such an intense chapter. My heart was pounding the entire time. Great show of emotion between those two.

Please update soon, the suspense will kill me, lol.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2007 1:03:15 PM Title: Chapter 6

Awwwww nice chapter end.

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2007 5:16:29 PM Title: Chapter 4

Ahh, Hank is so sweet!
P.S. Sucks what happened to Carol in this but she is still a cow!
P.P.S. This story is awesome and complex and can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2007 1:33:59 PM Title: Chapter 5

Evil cliffhanger!!!!

more, MORE, MORE

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2007 3:02:43 AM Title: Chapter 5

GAH! Cliffhanger! hehehe... ain't they great? Keeps the spark going until the next installment.
I'm lovin' this story - great emotional tension on all fronts. Kitty's indecisiveness almost pissed me off, though - glad she got her head on straight.

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2007 7:42:41 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh crap! This is not good.
Great but evil cliffhanger.
I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2007 3:40:31 AM Title: Chapter 4

Gah, I just want more. That's all there is to say. :)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2007 3:33:43 PM Title: Chapter 4

Well I'm all for removing Carol from Marie's mind!

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2007 3:52:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh my, this is Freaking awesome! I love this take on the whole Carol-thing and the Logan-who-wants-Marie-and-therefore-Carol-even-though-she-is-a-psycho-and-he-doesn't-want-to.....just awesome! Cannot wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: rawrave Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2007 7:15:06 PM Title: Chapter 3

Geez, what a story, so fuckin' brutal in parts, and yet she's slowly starting to work past the craziness with Logan at least. Maybe that's Marie working her way through at last, but then there is Carol, allowing Logan to know her name at the end was definitely a big step.
Logan's conflicting feelings about this girl, in appearance at least everything he has ever wanted, but now he's finding out things, and experiencing feelings for 'this woman', he never thought he could. Phew, fucked up craziness all round!
A great chapter, lookin' forward to more.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2007 4:36:30 PM Title: Chapter 3

Yeah it's not so nice to be in Marie's body... in Maries mind.

Reviewer: rawrave Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2007 8:39:38 AM Title: Chapter 2

Ok yeah I kinda like this Carol too! She's so messed up, its actually kinda funny.
Love the whole idea of this story, am DYING to know where you're gonna take it! LOL, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2007 3:29:15 AM Title: Chapter 2

Damn damn damn I think only Marie can fight Carol.

Reviewer: Ashnan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2007 12:13:09 AM Title: Chapter 2

Part 2 was just awesome. Really hooked me. Can't wait for the update.

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 7:25:13 PM Title: Chapter 2

That was really good, my heart was pounding the entire time.

I can't wait for part 3. Looking forward to it.

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 6:05:27 PM Title: Chapter 2

Yikes! Intense story. Love that. I'll read more, and thanks!

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 4:41:51 PM Title: Chapter 2

..Is it bad that I LOVE this Carol? :)

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 9:58:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm totally addicted, what a cliffhanger can't wait to read more. luv it.

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 9:14:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was a really good start, I look forward to the next part.

Reviewer: Ashnan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 7:27:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait for the next part. Poor Wolvie. Poor Hank. Just, poor clueless men in general.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 5:39:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh how can you end the first chapter with such an evil cliffhanger?!

Evil, so evil!

more please

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