Reviews For Cell Mates
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Reviewer: bunnigirl74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2014 3:17:56 PM Title: Chapter 4

o.o Holy Crap! I hope your wife gets better soon. I just found the site again, and found your story. I'd love to see more if you are able.

Reviewer: Capt_Mackenzie Signed half star [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 6:56:22 PM Title: Chapter 4

The images here have stuck with me for years. They're nightmarish. I hate them. This story should come with a WARNING! It's a grotesquely disturbing image that I wish I could blot out forever but never entirely leaves my imagination.

Author's Response: I'm sorry your response was so negative. I think the story is accurately labeled (as Dark and Drama). I think a lot of elements in this fandom ARE disturbing, and I wanted a story that gave "fanservice" in the darkest and most literal way: "make them together, forever!" Be careful what we wish for... But if this story offended you or troubled you seriously, I am sorry. I hope you find other stories of mine, or other authors, that you enjoy. Best wishes. M

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2010 1:06:45 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wow! I just read this and I think I'll have nightmares tonight! What a gloriously twisted view of what Rogue's power could do.

Reviewer: Aquarius Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 11:10:06 PM Title: Chapter 4

wow...dark, so very dark it's creepy

Author's Response: thanks. actually, not nearly the darkest thing I've done, but it IS supposed to be creepy, so thank you! -Killjoy

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 4:20:40 PM Title: Chapter 4

ok this story had wonderful detail and description but I felt the plot was incomplete and had no real resolution. It feels like just one scene out of a much larger story. Its an incredibly inventive concept though, so good job.

Author's Response: First, thanks for your comments. Specific feedback is SO hard to find. As to the part of a larger story comment, I think all comic stories really are in media res, that is, taking place in the middle of a larger tapestry. I think your desire for resolution is understandable, but the point of the story is that this situation is unending. She and he are in equilibrium, unable to break free, to be killed, or to die. It has a purgatorial quality, or it does if I did it right. Thanks again. -Killjoy

Reviewer: wudelfin Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 10:12:59 AM Title: Chapter 4

sorry to see others downplay your talent. personally love this story, very innovative. Imho jealousy is such an ugly thing.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment. I don;t think it's jealousy, I really think it's just a narrow view of what constitutes a fan story. I have enjoyed he PUBLIC comments here very much. -Killjoy

Reviewer: aranenumenesse Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 3:16:35 AM Title: Chapter 4

Can't say that I didn't see that coming. BUT... Wow. I still don't like the way this story turned out, but I bow before your style and execution.

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments. I always enjoy an audience that can separate their preferences from my storytelling. -Killjoy

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