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Reviewer: Dianora Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2017 5:38:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was a very interesting turn of events. The imagery was horrific in places (as you probably intended) and it stayed with me a long time. Very original. The story felt somewhat disconnected in places but it was still very well written. What I don't understand is why did the Professor or any other telepath leave Logan and Marie in such a state? Could they not hear their pain? Why not put them out of their misery? Did they not deserve better? All in all great work but these questions kept bugging me.

Reviewer: bunnigirl74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2014 3:17:56 PM Title: Chapter 4

o.o Holy Crap! I hope your wife gets better soon. I just found the site again, and found your story. I'd love to see more if you are able.

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2013 10:00:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wooow. I'm very curious about Rogue's new power.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. Every time I think my work has been forgotten, a new reader will share a comment and make it worthwhile to have written. Best Wishes, M

Reviewer: Capt_Mackenzie Signed half star [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 6:56:22 PM Title: Chapter 4

The images here have stuck with me for years. They're nightmarish. I hate them. This story should come with a WARNING! It's a grotesquely disturbing image that I wish I could blot out forever but never entirely leaves my imagination.

Author's Response: I'm sorry your response was so negative. I think the story is accurately labeled (as Dark and Drama). I think a lot of elements in this fandom ARE disturbing, and I wanted a story that gave "fanservice" in the darkest and most literal way: "make them together, forever!" Be careful what we wish for... But if this story offended you or troubled you seriously, I am sorry. I hope you find other stories of mine, or other authors, that you enjoy. Best wishes. M

Reviewer: Capt_Mackenzie Signed half star [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 6:55:03 PM Title: Chapter 3

The images here have stuck with me for years. They're nightmarish. I hate them. This story should come with a WARNING! It's a grotesquely disturbing image that I wish I could blot out forever but never entirely leaves my imagination.

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2010 1:06:45 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wow! I just read this and I think I'll have nightmares tonight! What a gloriously twisted view of what Rogue's power could do.

Reviewer: Aquarius Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 11:10:06 PM Title: Chapter 4

wow...dark, so very dark it's creepy

Author's Response: thanks. actually, not nearly the darkest thing I've done, but it IS supposed to be creepy, so thank you! -Killjoy

Reviewer: Aquarius Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 10:37:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

wow...jumping to the next chapter quickly

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 4:20:40 PM Title: Chapter 4

ok this story had wonderful detail and description but I felt the plot was incomplete and had no real resolution. It feels like just one scene out of a much larger story. Its an incredibly inventive concept though, so good job.

Author's Response: First, thanks for your comments. Specific feedback is SO hard to find. As to the part of a larger story comment, I think all comic stories really are in media res, that is, taking place in the middle of a larger tapestry. I think your desire for resolution is understandable, but the point of the story is that this situation is unending. She and he are in equilibrium, unable to break free, to be killed, or to die. It has a purgatorial quality, or it does if I did it right. Thanks again. -Killjoy

Reviewer: wudelfin Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 10:12:59 AM Title: Chapter 4

sorry to see others downplay your talent. personally love this story, very innovative. Imho jealousy is such an ugly thing.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment. I don;t think it's jealousy, I really think it's just a narrow view of what constitutes a fan story. I have enjoyed he PUBLIC comments here very much. -Killjoy

Reviewer: aranenumenesse Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2007 3:16:35 AM Title: Chapter 4

Can't say that I didn't see that coming. BUT... Wow. I still don't like the way this story turned out, but I bow before your style and execution.

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments. I always enjoy an audience that can separate their preferences from my storytelling. -Killjoy

Reviewer: Solidae Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2007 11:57:23 AM Title: Chapter 3

Coming out of lurkdom to ask you not to listen to the critics... Your story is gripping and appropriate for this site. There are many differant views on the Logan/Rogue dynamic - and this one, while not the norm, is still wonderful and interesting. I hope that I will see your name pop up again...

Author's Response: Well, it seems possible that I was just being harassed by a vocal minority. I will definitely finish this story before I decide anything about future postings. Thank you for your comments. I am always very anxious to her what worked and what didn't in my stories. I appreciate any feedback. -Killjoy

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2007 8:51:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

hmm....... Thats interesting. I am sad reading this and I am getting a really bad feeling. Are they sharing body? are they somehow fused together.Can they be seperated? What caused all this in the first place? I need to know these things. Update as soon as you can.

Author's Response: Fused together- what a great image! "Can they be separated?" Well, I wrote this for a fan who begged "Please just write ONE fic where Rogue and Wolverine are together forever!" I am a romantic at heart, so here it is... No, they belong 2gther 4ever! *laughs* -Killjoy

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2007 4:55:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I had such hopes after starting this one: Maybe you would be turning a new leaf and be willing to give us a slightly less angsty coupling. But alas! No such luck. LOL. Well, as usual (despite your angst-geniusness), wonderful writing and looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Angst? Moi? You got the wrong guy. I just wanted to write a believable story about why they are together. Strapping them to one another like Sidney Poitier and Tony Curtiss seemed like a logical next step... which may explain why I don't date much. (Just kidding. I don't date because it upsets my wife...) -Killjoy

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2007 9:30:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Uhoh, do I detect a little resentment towards the end? Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: resentment? heck yeah!

Reviewer: rawrave Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2007 7:21:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Angsty, intriguing and leaving me aching for more.
What was in that report that got Alex Scott so riled, where are they being held, will there be an escape?
And more importantly will I have the patience to hang on 'till after exam week?
LOL, Great start :)

Author's Response: Thanks. I'll try to update when I can, but I have 160 exams to give over the next few weeks.

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