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Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2009 6:10:35 AM Title: Chapter 11

did Marie come to him> omg, i am on the edge of my seat!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2009 6:07:39 AM Title: Chapter 10

oh lord, this is such a great plot! what is going to happen???

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2009 5:57:38 AM Title: Chapter 7

Alaric...omg, he's the son of the blacksmith who slold land to Marie...YAY potential happy ending?! god i hope so!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2009 5:41:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

omg, so glad i followed this thread and stumbled across the last part of Tier. please let there be a happy ending. after finishing Tier i was soooooo heart-broken that Rogue was on her own in a new town.

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2007 4:29:56 AM Title: Chapter 12

Yay! Not a happy ending, but a hopeful one. They had a rough trip - hope there's happiness ahead.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2007 12:05:32 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'm kinda sad but Logan without the wolf part may be easier to handle.

Author's Response: See the response below for explanation. :)

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2007 9:04:31 AM Title: Chapter 12

Aw, but I liked the Wolf. :(

Author's Response: It was getting out of control. Didn't want to turn this to a dark fic with very vivid description of how it ate Marie.

Reviewer: Amoraluv Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2007 4:38:59 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wow!!!

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 9:45:42 AM Title: Chapter 11

This comes across as appropriately confusing.
Really, but REALLY hope Buddy's going to be okay! ;-)
Does the "she" refer to Buddy? Because that would be the first time Logan is giving the little creature a person's pronoun - would be interesting to see if it supports his being human (as opposed to the wolfish "Easy prey for him. Nothing but a mouthful of fur and bones." of his flashback).

Author's Response: Yeah, it's Buddy. The "she". Don't read too much about it. It's getting hard and boring as hell to refer to Buddy just using "it". In my own language it's easy, but in english... I don't know. It just doesn't come out sounding right. And don't worry. I'm sure Buddy will be just fine. :)

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 9:38:56 AM Title: Chapter 10

Yes, quite what I thought Alaric's elders and betters have in mind. I quite like the fellah.

Who has poisoned Logan, I wonder? And why? He would've been easier game out in the forest, wouldn't he?

Hope these lycans don't turn into yet another bad-guys outfit. If their ways aren't the ones fit for Marie and Logan it doesn't necessarily mean that they are evil.

Author's Response: I'm not so sure if Alaric was right about everything...

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2007 3:38:41 PM Title: Chapter 11

I'm just as confused as Wolvie is.

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2007 6:04:48 PM Title: Chapter 10

AUGHUGHGH! Gods, this is riveting! I love me a good werewolf story, and having Logan in the lead role is just wickedly delicious.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2007 4:38:47 PM Title: Chapter 10

Very interesting, very scary!

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2007 7:29:41 AM Title: Chapter 9

The Wolverine in Marie's room must be the most sweetly emotional scene in the whole Tier-Wolfen story so far!

Glad that you are back to taking your time with these scenes, and giving us the chance to follow Logan's reasonings.

On a grammar level, you might perhaps wish to purchase a load of both definite and indefinite articles (THE meat was dark brown; THE people surrounding him were just people; THE realization made it even harder; even A husband...).

Also, a short look at word order in questions probably couldn't hurt: She had left. (Subject-modal-verb) => Why had she left? (Question word-modal-subject-verb).

Any hint as to when I should go back to reading Tier (just so that the time-line works for the story)?

Author's Response: Thanks for the grammar lecture! :) I swear I'll trash my comp soon... as for the Tier, that's it. Wolfen kind of took off where it ended. Well tag along with Logan for a while now and see if we can have this mess sorted out with him. If he can't solve his problems and save Marie, we return to Marie's POV in a third story.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2007 12:37:15 PM Title: Chapter 9

Hold on, wait, I can't find my drums for the bum bum BUM. Oh well, you're just going to have to update SOON! P.s. I love the fact that he named his fox Buddy. Now THATS badass. :D

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2007 12:33:52 PM Title: Chapter 9

*One good reason, that’s all I’m asking…*
“I know where she is…”


That's a good reason...

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2007 12:29:28 PM Title: Chapter 8

Well not all Lycans have to be evil.

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Date: 05/17/2007 4:25:40 AM Title: Chapter 7

Hehehe great idea!!!

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Date: 05/17/2007 4:20:37 AM Title: Chapter 6

*Pee in there, and I’ll have your hide…*

*giggling*

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Date: 05/17/2007 4:18:38 AM Title: Chapter 5

Awww cute fiery little fox.

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Date: 05/17/2007 4:14:20 AM Title: Chapter 4

Awww Logan the fox daddy.

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Date: 05/17/2007 4:09:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

Awwww trying to feed foxes, cute.

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2007 8:06:44 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oh WOW, that really came as a surprise, and very well executed, too!
Great the many turns - humans: enemies => the yellow flash: possible allies => "I wasn't born that way"..... and then it's Salem, and even my very slow little mind recognises the name: Matt.

But Aranum, please, don't make another spin-off. Please. There's just so much that I can take... ;-)

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2007 7:51:58 AM Title: Chapter 4

Aww, he had to kill the fox, his only neighbour! Or maybe he didn't have to? Perhaps he was just to depressed himself to see any hope for mumfox?
"All fight and fire gone." It's slowly draining out of him, isn't it? The fight against the beast and the fight for Marie. The taking-care might be the only thing to link him to humanity now, and it might be good that Marie is not there to be the object of this need. Not good for him, of course, but good for any chance the two might have at a partnership between equals.

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 3:24:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

Poor Logan. But oddly enough, it was like she became more important to him during that year than she was before. Her purpose in his life became clear: "his anchor", "reminding him constantly to which side he belonged". Maybe that was also because they were drifting apart in other ways.

I love the loneliness implied in the near-caress that wasn't. And Logan trying to make friends but being denied in the animal kingdom. He belongs nowhere. EXCEPT WITH MARIE. Go get her, Logan. *pushes*

Author's Response: I have the strangest feeling that the fox will gain even a bigger part in this fic. For some reason I keep seeing it, glaring at Logan. And not just any fox. Have you ever read Don Rosa's version of Donald Duck? I simply love his drawings, humoristic and full of details, and that fox came straight from there, and now it won't go away. So no, sorry. Logan can't leave and go after Marie. Not yet. :) Thanks for the fb. I was first little hesitant, but it felt like this was long overdue, to take a peek from Logan's point of view.

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