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Reviewer: Muzzow Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2009 5:14:11 AM Title: Chapter 16: The Truth Will Out.

Nice chapter. I really enjoy this story so far. Very well written.

About the parts in German language:

...Kurt's eyes grew large in realization. "Nein, nein..." he uttered over and over.

...Cutting off the Professor, Kurt accused, "Sie haben es gewusst und mir nie gesagt", slipping into his native language. "Mystique ist meine Mutter. Nein, nein, das ist nicht wahr."

The sister-sentence is correct.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2008 4:55:48 AM Title: Chapter 16: The Truth Will Out.

German unit one:

No, no...
Nein, nein...

You knew and never told me.
Sie wussten es und haben es mir nie gesagt.

Mystique is my mother. No, no, it is not true.
Mystique ist meine Mutter. Nein, nein das ist nicht wahr.

You are my sister
Sie sind meine Schwester (polite form)
Du bist meine Schwester (Kurt is agitated and he and Rogue are kinda the same age so he would prolly say 'du' in German)

Author's Response: Thanks. My German is limited to counting to ten.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2008 4:49:20 AM Title: Chapter 16: The Truth Will Out.

This is getting better and better!

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: Kelara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2008 1:37:09 AM Title: Chapter 16: The Truth Will Out.

Let's go over the German again, please :o):

You knew and never told me: Sie haben es gewusst und es mir nie gesagt!

Mystique is my mother. No, no, it is not true: Mystique ist meine Mutter. Nein, nein, das ist nicht wahr!

You are my sister: Du bist meine Schwester.

-> About "du" and "Sie": Both are "you" in English, but "Sie" is a very polite form, so it would probably fit in adresses to Xavier, but Rouge would probably be adressed in a more informal way, so "du" is more appropriate.

As for language references: I am native German :o).

Author's Response: Thanks. I used a online translation website, I think next time I'll ask for help instead.

Reviewer: CocoLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2008 9:29:19 PM Title: Chapter 16: The Truth Will Out.

I am so excited that I saw you posted another chapter, it's been so long I've missed this.:)
"Hank rolled his eyes, unable to believe that Logan was flirting with the woman who tried to kill him."

Hmmmmm*wink*wink

"Standing behind the perplex glass, Rogue smiled at Logan, “Alone at last.” "

Author's Response: Thanks. I know it's took me a while to post, but my Mum had a rather serious health scare over Christmas and writing was the last thing on my mind.

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