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Reviewer: Rogue1189 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 6:20:50 PM Title: "Naked in the Woods"

eeekkkkkk I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!

BEST STORY EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really liked it you did such a good job with it and oui it was just magnificnet I have goosebumps all ever from it. I loved how you turned Logan into a regular man and I knew that eventually he would get his powers back but when u threw in the whole poisoning thing yeah that totally caught me offguard!!!!!

But I'm still wondering what happens after happily ever after? What happened to Magneto, Susan? was that her name??? Mystique? Did she stay with them?????

Oh well nevertheless it was brilliant and thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!


I'd give you a rating of 100 but it doesn't go that high oh well ^__^

Author's Response: I am considering this a finished piece, but I can theorize about some characters. Magneto and Toad escape after some effort. A bad guy as delicious and as powerful as Magneto cannot be caught and tamed so easily, after all. We need conflict to make good stories, so he gets away. Shelly - she got shipped out of the country to a place where she'll be *ahem* rehabilitated. I just needed her to go away humanely. Mystique... ah, Mystique. She'll hang with the X-Men for a while, until she gets bored, and then she'll move along on her own path and projects. She can only be good for so long, after all.

Reviewer: Tasa Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2009 10:11:17 PM Title: "Naked in the Woods"

Oh wow. What a good story =) I really enjoyed reading this. Now I have to watch Butch Cassidy & the Sundance Kid to understand all of the references.

The story title had me humming Alice Cooper's Poison all day. But that's a good thing. =)

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2008 12:14:05 AM Title: "On the Roof, In the Bottle"

I like drunken Logan ;)

Reviewer: Rhogue Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 11:39:10 PM Title: "Storms and Strategies"

This story is amazing. The whole plot just flowed together seamlessly, and was very easy to visualize. It was the first W/R fic I'd read, and I absolutely fell in love with every aspect of it. From capturing the characters' personalities to furthering their relationships, there's no word to summarize it, it's that great. A huge congrats for all of your hard efforts, and for a job that's over the top. =D

Author's Response: Your first fic? I'm humbled! I wish the fic I'm working on now would fall together as easily as Poison, did, but it's not happening that way. Thank you so much for your kind words.rn

Reviewer: litlen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2008 7:00:30 AM Title: "Naked in the Woods"

Loved Rogue in this one – sassy and strong and loved the interaction between her and Logan throughout the whole story. Great fic well done x

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm fond of this side of Rogue, too. To handle a mutation like hers, you'd have to have a sense of humor and a backbone of steel.

Reviewer: SmileyCindy Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2008 3:23:40 AM Title: "Storms and Strategies"

Wow! It took me a week to read it but what a read! This is what's been keeping me up all these late nights! LOL
I loved every chapter and I loved how the length of each one was short but not TOO SHORT! I was soooo hoping the cure was temporarily because I was beginning to lose hope but it ending so perfectly. Naked wedding? Awesome! What a wonderful story! Wuveddd it! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! It kept me up a lot of late nights writing it - almost a year's worth, give or take a month or two. I tend to work in fits and starts. I'm glad you enjoyed the ride.

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 9:09:06 PM Title: "Naked in the Woods"

The wedding ring quilt made me smile; my grandmother used to make those. Fabulous chapter as usual!

Author's Response: They desperately needed blankies - it's cold in the woods at night, naked. I know. Been there, done that. *oops!* I kept tying in parts of my life in this chapter for some reason. I intend to learn quilting this winter, and I'm a Butch & Sundance fan, and Bruce the Spruce resides in my side yard - he got named one day while I was sloshed on brown ale. (Pete Cedar lives at the end of my laneway.)

Reviewer: September Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 6:09:37 PM Title: "Naked in the Woods"

But I’d wager a bundle that Butch never did this to Sundance
Oh that just made me snort with laughter. It wasn't a pretty sight lmao!!

I'm so glad you wrote the final part. It was light and deep and emotional and warm and fuzzy all at once. A perfect way to end *g*

Author's Response: That line just popped in my head while I was hammering away. I wanted some kind of Butch & Sundance reference in here to tie up the ending, and that one just blindsided me. I was laughing while I wrote it! Thanks, September.

Reviewer: Gersemi Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 5:33:27 PM Title: "Naked in the Woods"

“I’m still just... just... you’re so...uhhh,” Rogue hedged, at a loss for words.

“Big?” Logan offered with a smug grin.


Ahahaha! *rofl* So made of win.
Love it. It fits them perfectly, and I loved Nervous!Kurt. =)

Author's Response: I loved Kurt in the movies, and he seemed so self-conscious and a little ill at ease, so I thought I'd play with him a little. But he tries so hard, and in the end he gets the job done. I'm still talking about Kurt here, in spite of the Logan sex scene. lol!

Reviewer: Vickie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 1:21:22 PM Title: "Naked in the Woods"

This is just what I needed today to cheer me up. I love the wedding ceremony it fit Logan and Rogue perfectly, they don't need no flash. Wonderful chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks! I just couldn't see them doing anything 'routine' even though Logan was willing, even gave her the chance to get the stereotypical wedding dress (he wants her to have 'normal' somehow), but the poor lust-addled girl just didn't want to wait!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 4:31:35 AM Title: "Naked in the Woods"

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww ^_^

Author's Response: *blush* Awwwwww, thanks! *wink*

Reviewer: Phoenix Fire Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2007 5:36:43 PM Title: "Ten Dollars"

I'm speechless! I really am! I just sat and read the whole thing (well impressed with the length, by the way) and all I can say is 'wow' and 'awwww'!
I really enjoyed this. I was just going to read the first couple of chapters, but then I had to read it all, I couldn't possibly stop. I applaud you for a very enjoyable story!

Author's Response: Thank you! When you said 'well impressed with the length' my gutter mind went instantly to Logan's crotch. LOL! I'm glad you enjoyed. Feedback is heavenly and indulgent. Blessings!

Reviewer: Vickie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2007 3:34:40 PM Title: "Ten Dollars"

You've done it again, another great chapter. I'm going to miss the story. Don't suppose their's any chance of a sequel, where they get there revenge of Magneto.

Author's Response: No way in hell. I love writing Magneto dialogue because his voice is so strong in my head (not like Rogue, but you get the drift: I can hear him talking, Ian's got that special 'something' that sticks with you). But coming up with a plot an action that would do justice is just too much work for me now. I do plan some side stories, like the epilogue, and I think possibly the OCs might show up in other stories (except Shelly), like they did in "Softball, Hot Dogs, and Wild Turkey" (I needed bodies to fill out the teams). But alas, Buckethead must go free this time. *swoon*

Reviewer: September Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2007 2:53:54 PM Title: "Ten Dollars"

I'm gonna miss this fic! - it's been my treat when I get home from work everyday - now I'm gonna have to do something hideous, like housework or something *shudder*

I absolutely loved your proposal scene. Logan's wry comment when he had to get to his knees to get the fallen ring, the whole thing was just gentle and natural and perfect.

And “you know me: what doesn’t kill me, pisses me off.” - Lol! Yep, that's Logan alright.

I look forward to the epilogue :o)

Author's Response: Of the entire roller-coaster ride, that proposal/wedding scene was the only one I was really unsure of - but then I don't consider myself a schmaltzy romatnic, nor a hard-bitten sort either, so I was working in strange turf. Knowing that a few people were eagerly awaiting their daily "Poison" fix makes the whole thing worth while. It took months and months to write the whole thing, and I was doing brief edits right up to the daily postings, so I invested way too much into it. You make that all fell better, and I thank you.

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2007 12:00:12 PM Title: "Ten Dollars"

That was such a great story, I'm sad to see it end. I can't wait for the epilogue.

Author's Response: I may need a short vacation, and a long margarita before I launch into that - lol!

Reviewer: Gersemi Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2007 11:01:27 AM Title: "Ten Dollars"

Awe-some!

I didn't pick this up until you had chapter 34 or so posted, and read it all in one go (okay, it took me three days, but you get the idea ;) ). And boy, was it great.

You know, I think this is the first W/R story I ever read where the poisoning effect of adamantium comes into play. Most Logan-loses-his-powers stories don't go into that at all. But I guess that's mostly due to that little bit being comic info. *shrugs*

Anyway, I loved how you handled this situation, and I loved your original characters, by the way. The twins were fun. :)

Oooh, I'm really looking forward to that epilogue!

Author's Response: When I came up with the idea of the adamantium poisoning him, I thought it surely must be a fresh topic for an X-fic, then after researching and asking a few questions, there really isn't such a critter as a fresh topic - it'd been done. I tried to get the fresh approach to the 'already done' topic. I love the twins, but they're conversation is hard to write and keep fresh. I think 'bait girl' was my favorite put-down.

Reviewer: SacredMacha Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2007 10:45:36 AM Title: "Ten Dollars"

Well I've been quiet 'til now. More because work has me blurry eyed and seeing double.

I loved it. Pure and simple. The research you had to have done on the metal poisoning made my little nerd's heart sigh.

The finding the tags thing made me smirk, too.

All in all, I was waiting as patiently as I ever do for anything, every day, hoping for a chapter.

I'm so sad it's over! Happy ending, but now what am I going to wait for! lol

Author's Response: The research was the first thing for me, once I had the idea hammered out. I'm stickler enough to want the details to be 'basically' right, but not technical enough to interfere with the flow of the story - hardcore medical fics bore me when they're not grossing me out. I always thought Logan needed to throw the tags away (Movie!Verse), but Rogue needed them as a keepsake (Fic!Verse).

Reviewer: Trins Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2007 6:49:28 AM Title: "Ten Dollars"

This story has been absolutley amazing and i am very sorry to see it ending. I can not wait for the epilogue and hope to see more amazing fics from you in the future.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm definitely NOT going to write a monster as long as this again - it was too time-consuming and too demanding. But short fics are constantly cooking in my brain, which accounts for the reason why my hats no longer fit properly.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2007 6:10:08 AM Title: "Ten Dollars"

“you know me: what doesn’t kill me, pisses me off.”

Hehe that's so Logan.


Awwwwww... he asked her... awwww *very happy sigh*




Author's Response: That mangled quote was a gift from my cousin, and it fitted Logan to a T, so in it went!

Reviewer: sharonmjl47 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2007 5:35:54 AM Title: "Ten Dollars"

*boncing in seat and clapping hands like a mad woman!*

Whoo hoo! What a lovely ending. A Pure and Primal wedding, wish i'd thought of tha 10 yars ago, but then again, i don't think i could have coped with seening my priest naked! *Shudder*

Author's Response: *falls about the place, laughing at the nekkid priest* Thanks. It seemed appropriate, considering what they'd been through.

Reviewer: aranenumenesse Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2007 4:27:33 AM Title: "Ten Dollars"

What a ride. And now that it's over (well, almost over...), I can only keep wondering why on earth I start readin these stories while they are still unfinished. I have certainly enjoyed every bump and turn along the road, but it's the same with these long, exceptionally good stories every time. After they're ready and finished, they leave a gap. Everything's said and done, but they still leave the reader wanting more.

Author's Response: I know the feeling - I had the sam reaction to you Das Tier *mumbledoesn't know German*. I actually went to the list and started to make a post, then realized - there was nothing to post. And thanks for the 'wanting more' comment. Coming from you, that's amazing praise.

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2007 3:56:43 AM Title: "Ten Dollars"

*claps* fabulous, wonderful story. I'm glad there's gonna be an epilogue (feel free to add the wedding night as well *hint*)

Author's Response: Umh, well, yeah - that's about what I had in mind, although it might be a separate second chapter! Depends on how wordsy I get. Thanks!

Reviewer: Vickie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2007 8:25:53 AM Title: “Stitches”

Yay, Logan's healing can't wait for him to be up, about and kicking ass, and playing house wth Rogue.

Author's Response: Playing house with Rogue - I love that turn of phrase. It always gives me a giggle. Might have to work that in there somewhere.... *ponders*

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2007 3:23:09 AM Title: “Stitches”

WOOHOO WOOHOO WOOHOO Logan's mutation is back!


Author's Response: I may get dark and deadly once in a while, but not THAT often. lol! I think I've only killed Logan off in one story, and that hurt!

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2007 2:09:17 AM Title: “Stitches”

Woohoo! Logan's on the mend! :)

Author's Response: *grabs Dromeda and does the Dance of Joy!*

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