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Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 4:24:26 AM Title: "Dinner is Served & Bobby is Toast"

Does it make me a complete dork that I waited up an extra half-hour in hopes that a new chapter of this story would be posted? It does? Thought so!

Author's Response: Dork? No. Flattering to me? Yes! Glad I posted this one a little early - don't want to be the source of your insomnia.

Reviewer: Deb Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2007 3:03:24 PM Title: "Out of Options"

I really like it so far. Update soon please!

Reviewer: QueenC86 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2007 10:31:18 AM Title: "Out of Options"

omg poor logan, i can feel my heart breaking for him. and i like where u said about a cure for the cure, i was thinking along the same lines (before you wrote it) what if logan mutation created a cure for the cure before it went away and is in his blood, and to test it rogue took it with anyone knowing but her and Hank, just an idea i though i would through in there.

cant wait till chapter 10

Author's Response: Ya know, that 'cure/cure from Logan's blood' idea is sorta brilliant! I know NOTHING of medicine, but that's a great little piece of bait for a storyline.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2007 3:37:45 AM Title: "Out of Options"

suicide watch

If he tries anything like this I'll beat the living shit out off him - and now that he is de-mutated it will hurt!

I hope they find a cure for the cure or that, like in the movie, the cure doesn't last... at least for Logan.

Author's Response: <<< beat the living shit out off him - and now that he is de-mutated it will hurt! *** LOL! de-mutated. I like that word.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2007 11:34:30 AM Title: "Scars"

well Damn! That is a shitty thing to happen to Logan. Hopefully they will realize that the cure wears off. (unless you don't go that route) I loved this chapter. Great job! Update soon.

Author's Response: Yep, and Magneto's just the type to do that. Evil bastard! About going that route or not - well, that'll give away some major plot that I've worked VERY HARD on, so no comment. >:-)

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2007 10:00:10 AM Title: "Scars"

This can't be happening!!!!!! This is not good.

I can't wait for the next chapter, it sucks because I'm going on vacation where there is no computer. I can't wait until I get back to the story.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2007 4:20:02 AM Title: "Scars"

I'm afraid of what the Adamantium will do... if it'll be poisonous without the healing factor...

next chapter please

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2007 4:05:02 AM Title: "Magnolias and Mayhem"

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!


Author's Response: *hands bima a glass of water, an ice pack, and aspirin* I never said it wouldn't be a bumpy ride. *pat pat*

Reviewer: September Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2007 7:27:21 PM Title: "Magnolias and Mayhem"

If he was going to pursue a woman’s attentions, he would absolutely not play fair.
Ha! Too true!

Oh but you are evil with your cliffhangers in this *g*

Logan had never, ever yelled for her in that tone of voice.
I almost don't want to know what's gonna happen next. I think the next chapter will be read peering between the gaps between my fingers... and possibly with a cushion to hide behind as well. This cannot be good.

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2007 7:15:54 PM Title: "Magnolias and Mayhem"

OMG!!!! NOOOOOOOOO, Logan couldn't have been hit with the cure!

Please update soon.

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2007 7:02:10 AM Title: "Magnolias and Mayhem"

This chapter has finally caught me for the story! I'm a little stressed right now, so I admit to often just browsing and finding some of the previous chapters a little tediously heavy on dialogue, but I also realise that it has become so rare to have the Bobby-Logan-Rogue triangle actually spelt out in its own right (instead of as a preamble to Rogan smut ;-) that I have lost the patience to follow it. Which I should; it's worth it.

But now, this chapter. There's a lot (more?) succint lines here that capture the feeling of the situation and the relationships really well.

The light-hearted one of Rogue and Logan in company, when there is no angst and you can see how well they go together and with others if given half a chance: "they’d had a lengthy and pun-riddled discussion in the jeep whether it should be optical mouses or optical meese..."

Their comfortable familiarity with each other that has not faded into indifferently taking the other for granted: "Rogue and Logan stared each other down, neither one blinking, until Marie got bored enough to surrender."

Logan's way of 'courting' Rogue perfectly in character with this relationship - no need to be brash ("It just sat there and glowed at her."), and all him ("If he was going to pursue a woman’s attentions, he would absolutely not play fair."). Wherever he got it, he has much more experience in this department than Bobby - which could have made Logan a calculating bastard in this situation (unsettling prospect), but it clearly hasn't (" He hated to see her so unhappy...").

Quite nice how well their two approaches to this new possibility and their POV in general are set off against each other:
"...it would help pick her spirits up. - Jewelry always made women happy, right? - When in doubt, stick with the classics. - And it would put enough pressure on her to take him seriously..."
"It was the most elegant thing she’d ever seen. - Rogue goggled at the necklace and chains, too amazed to make a snap decision. - ...a simple chain that wouldn’t snag on any sweaters... - Her radiating joy .... Rogue stifled herself, not knowing for sure whether Logan would want..."

But this is all play, and in the instant the outside worlds starts meddling again (great how you portray Logan's reaction with painful memory and fighting instinct), they are both back down to business - and to the underlying comradeship, care and commitment towards each other that is much more precious than oaths of undying love.


Author's Response: I love the 'calculating bastard' quality in Logan's character, and this gives him a beneficial place to exercise that bastard. I also love Intelligent Logan, so he can play all the angles.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2007 2:50:02 AM Title: “Decisions and Deceptions”

It was true; she was ready to make the plunge into a sexual relationship, but not on a whim, and not....

The thought that crossed her mind shook her to the core.

Not with Bobby.


Yes!

No Bobby touches and no Bobby sex!

more please

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2007 2:44:10 AM Title: “Serpents in a Garden”

Bleh... no Bobby kissing... better more Logan kissing!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2007 10:03:41 AM Title: “Serpents in a Garden”

ohhh great chapter. I love Logan evesdropping. Wish he was just a bit more jeslous though. I am one of the few that actually like bobby so please don't be too hard on him. (unless he deserves it!) I really liked this chapter. Hope you update very soon!

Author's Response: I'm sorry, but Bobby is fair game in my universe. Mwahahaha! *oopsie* He's not so bad, just so.... Bobby.

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2007 9:01:24 AM Title: “Serpents in a Garden”

Interesting. I think Logan will have to fight for Rogue, I hope he wins.

I'm excited for the next update! Great work.

Reviewer: Valeriusjka Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 4:55:22 PM Title: "Fire and Ice"

I finally catched up on this series. I got very excited by the plot line of this story. It has so much potential and many possible outcomes.

Yet, I grew confused when I finally noticed that this series are post X3. It seemed to me that this was a canon, where the characterisations would fit prefectly. As it is, I can see an emotional gap in the actions of the characters. There's sorrow, hurt, rage, trauma missing.

As a whole this was a exciting reading and applaud your plot line.

Author's Response: SOmeone else commented on the lack of traumatic emotion in the wake of the entire Phoenix saga. I tried to comment on that yesterday, but the archive froze on me. argh? I played on the sense of survival and progress that I thought the closing scenes of X3 brought forth, particularly the long shot of Logan standing on the terrace, basking in the sun of a new day as Storm greeted children returning for a new school year. And, the rest of the story is going to get rather intense and dark, and I specifically did NOT want it bogged down by a load of Jean angst. I abhor heavy, dark stories that go on and on and depress the reader, so the focus of this story lies in other directions.

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 12:56:02 PM Title: "Fire and Ice"

Awesome chapter! I can't believe Bobby had to ruin the moment, oh well. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 6:15:47 AM Title: "Fire and Ice"

Uhoh I see drama coming...

more more more

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 3:32:22 PM Title: "Butch and Sundance"

Lot going on in this fic. The plotting and intrigue sounds like it took a GREAT deal of time, and I'm interested to see the ways in which this post-X3 world operates. Nice hints of Magneto's plans (and John in particular, Yay! John) and the question mark left by the new teacher. The suggestion that Rogue, Bobby, et.al. may have to fight soon. You've given us a bit of a lull in this latest chapter, but I'm looking forward to see where it goes.

It seems like everyone has gotten over the death from X3 pretty well, though. Has a lot of time past? The tone of the fic (and of the characters) is generally hopeful. Storm seems positive. Logan has gotten over his crying. No one seems to miss Scott. Poor Scott. *pets him*

And in this chapter? Logan is so charming, great sense of humor, and I love the fairly innocent courting of Rogue. It *does* kind of feel like courting, because there's the sexual tension there, which he's aware of, but he's working more to make her feel comfortable, open up, get to know him. But it's not so much old-fashioned as it is situational: Bobby, their own past. I loved the way Rogue tried to make the relationship more equal but ended up in a tickle fight. *g* And WHAT a cliffhanger! Meanie.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 6:23:46 AM Title: "Butch and Sundance"

*looks around, searching for the rest of the chapter*

Damn evil cliffhanger!!!

more please

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 10:56:10 PM Title: "Butch and Sundance"

AHH! Don't stop there! Can't wait for the next part.

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 3:17:49 PM Title: "Butch and Sundance"

Uhh....Logan. Stradling. Hardening bulge. *Gulp* And that last question, OMG! You are too cruel to leave us hanging like that! Update ASAP please!

Reviewer: September Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 3:10:23 PM Title: "Butch and Sundance"

“Has he kissed you since you took the cure?”

Oh good god update!!!! Like NOW!!!!


Author's Response: I guess I'm some of that 'twisty evil' that was mentioned below. *mwahaha!*

Reviewer: rawrave Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 11:30:57 AM Title: “Beauty Queens and Garden Hoses”

Shelly Hanson huh, spy and agent acting on behalf of Magneto? Or someone else altogether...intrigue...

Reviewer: rawrave Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 11:28:25 AM Title: "Storms and Strategies"

“Gentlemen, we take down the Wolverine.”

*scary* Damn, Magneto can be evil, but I guess its all part of his allure, sexy, cultured and all manners of twisty evil!

LOL, look forward to next chapter!

Author's Response: That line just oozed Magneto to me. I can see him, standing, smiling at his minions, that aura of smug megalomania seeping from his pores. Gotta love Buckethead!

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