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Thanks god Logan didn't cheat! But he better get his ass back to Marie and make up for running like that.
Since Mystique is getting her powers back, does that mean so are Logan and Marie?
I'm very excited for the next chapter.
Author's Response: sshhh! No giving away plot! lol...
oh thanks for this chapter so quickly after the last; couldn't stand the thought of Logan cheating.
Author's Response: It does take the pressure off somewhat. lol! Men!
Logan you idiot!
Hm hm hm so Miss Shelly is suspicious now - good!
Very skillful scene there between Toad and Shelly, I think - still can't wait to see her scalped ;-)
Unfortunately, she is now plot-wise more important than ever as the enemy within that is set off from the enemy no longer without, i.e. Mystique.
Hmm. Perhaps scalp her just a little? ;-)
Hmmm Mystique could recognize Shelly as her own kind... former own kind... maybe.
I think a date with Toad would be just perfect for Shelly *evil grin*
uh-oh, Logan's icky tummy makes me wonder what you're up to!
Thumbs up. DutchXFan is one of my favorite authors as well. Great chapter. I'm guessing Mystique=Trouble
Hey hey hey no action for Logan, maybe when he is healed.
Wonder what Logan will do when he finds out about Mystique.
Wolf, I'm just starting reading this (so behind in online life it's not funny). Rogue's line about having to ask permission to do something to her own body? WOW. Dead on. I do love me some X-Men, but I have to admit, I agree with Eric a lot.
Author's Response: That 'my body, my choice' issue hit me right from the first time I saw X3 - Bobby had to get just a tad put-off about Rogue taking the cure, when he should have been accepting (and in the context of that movie, perhaps grateful). But nooooo! That gave me the impetus to make it a sticking point between them in this story. Someone earlier commented that Rogue had been kind of nasty to Bobby, but that opening scene (for me, at least) sets the scene for why their relationship won't work (well, that, plus the presence of the very edible Logan).
Y'know, my favourite part of that whole chapter is the way you describe Logan lazily soaking in the warm afterglow. It's just purely delicious.
... You're about to do something horrible to them aren't you *g*
Author's Response: Um.. I uh... they... but... oh hell - please see comments following RouDeVil's review below. Ditto. >:-)
Awww the Wolverine is purring... ya know this chapter is great it's so realistic - absolutely love it!!!
Can't wait for more... hey did they use any birth control?
Author's Response: I believe Rogue commented earlier in the story that she was on the pill.
Yes, they finally did the deed! That was really hot. I wonder what is going to happen next, really looking forward to the next chapter.
AND you resist becoming too smutty for real - just acutely observed (not necessarily in the original sense of the word ;-) and carefully poised between angst, pain, self-consciousness, enjoyment and love. Wonderfully executed, this one.
LOVE the paragraph that has Rogue preparing - conveys everything in the terse checking off of trifles, and the utter panic of the last sentence.
(Admittedly, I find it hard to grasp the concept of actually planning and arranging a night like that, but hey.)
AND, though this is not really giving your story the dues it's worth, what I almost like most is the way you give each chapter a headline and how much care you have obviously put into the one-line summaries. Great regard for details is too often neglected - I greatly enjoy it here.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Baincainte - I'm a lover of those little details, too. And the snarkiness I TRY to put into those chapter summaries, I think, sort of breaks up the cumulative angst (yep, it's coming).
You know, this story has been quite a bit smuttier than I anticipated at the beginning. And I gotta say-- I don't hate it. :)
And all the virgin blood talk at the end of the lovin', just enough 'ewwwwwwww' to bring you back down to earth and make the whole thing more real. Good job.
Still, I refuse to be giddy. Several lovey chapters in a row?..... You're killing one of them aren't you?! :O
Author's Response: <<< You're killing one of them aren't you?! :O
Uhhh.... *ROFLMAO!* No comment!
Very nice!
The best line ever!!!
if i could think of something to say i would but god damn it girl we need chapter 20 like now.
my arms and hands are shaking from the emotion im feeling for them.
Author's Response: Paitence, deary - you'll get it tonight. Or, perhaps more accurately, Marie will 'get it' tonight.
NEXT PART...please!!!!!! AAAWWWWWW!!!!!
Hmmm the Wolverine is back... so Logan's mutation may come back... maybe?
This is not a chapter! This is a gigantic cliffhanger for the next chapter - very sneaky!
Author's Response: This is so a chapter! *stamps foot* It's an in-depth look into a mutual case of bad nerves over-ridden by desire.
And I got to play with Wolverine, too. THAT alone qualifies as chapter-worthy.
lol!
*hands a glass of ice water*
You'll be all right - just breathe deeply.
ahh, don't stop there! Great chapter; I hope next chappie picks up where this one left off.
I love it! I can't wait for later, this is going to be good.
Eagerly waiting for then next chapter.
Ooooh can't wait for the next chapter!
Wow the twins can write Greek, a friend learned Greek too and says it's quite hard to learn the different alphabet because it's like or kinda like (don't know exactly) the Russian.
Next chapter smutty, smut, smut?