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Reviewer: irishekl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2007 8:26:21 AM Title: “Open 24 Hours”

Thanks god Logan didn't cheat! But he better get his ass back to Marie and make up for running like that.

Since Mystique is getting her powers back, does that mean so are Logan and Marie?

I'm very excited for the next chapter.

Author's Response: sshhh! No giving away plot! lol...

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2007 4:01:47 AM Title: “Open 24 Hours”

oh thanks for this chapter so quickly after the last; couldn't stand the thought of Logan cheating.

Author's Response: It does take the pressure off somewhat. lol! Men!

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2007 3:47:55 AM Title: “Mystique’s Blues”

Logan you idiot!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2007 3:50:28 AM Title: “Two Beers, No Bugs”

Hm hm hm so Miss Shelly is suspicious now - good!

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2007 8:52:05 AM Title: "Tongues are Wagging"

Very skillful scene there between Toad and Shelly, I think - still can't wait to see her scalped ;-)
Unfortunately, she is now plot-wise more important than ever as the enemy within that is set off from the enemy no longer without, i.e. Mystique.
Hmm. Perhaps scalp her just a little? ;-)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2007 4:14:13 AM Title: "Tongues are Wagging"

Hmmm Mystique could recognize Shelly as her own kind... former own kind... maybe.

I think a date with Toad would be just perfect for Shelly *evil grin*

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2007 4:05:14 AM Title: "Tongues are Wagging"

uh-oh, Logan's icky tummy makes me wonder what you're up to!

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 4:35:06 AM Title: "After Midnight"

Thumbs up. DutchXFan is one of my favorite authors as well. Great chapter. I'm guessing Mystique=Trouble

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 4:26:45 AM Title: "After Midnight"

Hey hey hey no action for Logan, maybe when he is healed.

Wonder what Logan will do when he finds out about Mystique.

Reviewer: Lex Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2007 9:07:54 PM Title: "Storms and Strategies"

Wolf, I'm just starting reading this (so behind in online life it's not funny). Rogue's line about having to ask permission to do something to her own body? WOW. Dead on. I do love me some X-Men, but I have to admit, I agree with Eric a lot.

Author's Response: That 'my body, my choice' issue hit me right from the first time I saw X3 - Bobby had to get just a tad put-off about Rogue taking the cure, when he should have been accepting (and in the context of that movie, perhaps grateful). But nooooo! That gave me the impetus to make it a sticking point between them in this story. Someone earlier commented that Rogue had been kind of nasty to Bobby, but that opening scene (for me, at least) sets the scene for why their relationship won't work (well, that, plus the presence of the very edible Logan).

Reviewer: September Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2007 4:49:23 PM Title: "Happy Campers"

Y'know, my favourite part of that whole chapter is the way you describe Logan lazily soaking in the warm afterglow. It's just purely delicious.

... You're about to do something horrible to them aren't you *g*

Author's Response: Um.. I uh... they... but... oh hell - please see comments following RouDeVil's review below. Ditto. >:-)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2007 1:32:40 PM Title: "Happy Campers"

Awww the Wolverine is purring... ya know this chapter is great it's so realistic - absolutely love it!!!

Can't wait for more... hey did they use any birth control?

Author's Response: I believe Rogue commented earlier in the story that she was on the pill.

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2007 1:11:58 PM Title: "Happy Campers"

Yes, they finally did the deed! That was really hot. I wonder what is going to happen next, really looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2007 9:41:13 AM Title: "Happy Campers"

AND you resist becoming too smutty for real - just acutely observed (not necessarily in the original sense of the word ;-) and carefully poised between angst, pain, self-consciousness, enjoyment and love. Wonderfully executed, this one.

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2007 9:26:54 AM Title: "Denim and Dark Hair"

LOVE the paragraph that has Rogue preparing - conveys everything in the terse checking off of trifles, and the utter panic of the last sentence.
(Admittedly, I find it hard to grasp the concept of actually planning and arranging a night like that, but hey.)

AND, though this is not really giving your story the dues it's worth, what I almost like most is the way you give each chapter a headline and how much care you have obviously put into the one-line summaries. Great regard for details is too often neglected - I greatly enjoy it here.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Baincainte - I'm a lover of those little details, too. And the snarkiness I TRY to put into those chapter summaries, I think, sort of breaks up the cumulative angst (yep, it's coming).

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2007 7:04:34 AM Title: "Happy Campers"

You know, this story has been quite a bit smuttier than I anticipated at the beginning. And I gotta say-- I don't hate it. :)

And all the virgin blood talk at the end of the lovin', just enough 'ewwwwwwww' to bring you back down to earth and make the whole thing more real. Good job.

Still, I refuse to be giddy. Several lovey chapters in a row?..... You're killing one of them aren't you?! :O

Author's Response: <<< You're killing one of them aren't you?! :O Uhhh.... *ROFLMAO!* No comment!

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2007 4:29:01 AM Title: "Happy Campers"

Very nice!

Reviewer: sharonmjl47 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2007 4:25:02 AM Title: "Happy Campers"



The best line ever!!!

Reviewer: QueenC86 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2007 2:47:06 PM Title: "Denim and Dark Hair"

if i could think of something to say i would but god damn it girl we need chapter 20 like now.

my arms and hands are shaking from the emotion im feeling for them.

Author's Response: Paitence, deary - you'll get it tonight. Or, perhaps more accurately, Marie will 'get it' tonight.

Reviewer: sharonmjl47 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2007 3:41:36 AM Title: "Denim and Dark Hair"

NEXT PART...please!!!!!! AAAWWWWWW!!!!!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2007 3:31:13 AM Title: "Denim and Dark Hair"

Hmmm the Wolverine is back... so Logan's mutation may come back... maybe?

This is not a chapter! This is a gigantic cliffhanger for the next chapter - very sneaky!

Author's Response: This is so a chapter! *stamps foot* It's an in-depth look into a mutual case of bad nerves over-ridden by desire. And I got to play with Wolverine, too. THAT alone qualifies as chapter-worthy. lol! *hands a glass of ice water* You'll be all right - just breathe deeply.

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2007 2:59:09 AM Title: "Denim and Dark Hair"

ahh, don't stop there! Great chapter; I hope next chappie picks up where this one left off.

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2007 10:07:07 AM Title: "No Hugs for the Tin Man"

I love it! I can't wait for later, this is going to be good.

Eagerly waiting for then next chapter.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2007 2:38:45 AM Title: "No Hugs for the Tin Man"

Ooooh can't wait for the next chapter!


Wow the twins can write Greek, a friend learned Greek too and says it's quite hard to learn the different alphabet because it's like or kinda like (don't know exactly) the Russian.

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2007 2:33:25 AM Title: "No Hugs for the Tin Man"

Next chapter smutty, smut, smut?

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