Ohhh, loved this chapter. There were so many interesting phrases and parts.

I loved the use of Logan's sense here: '...and he could taste the flush creeping into her cheeks...'

And just imagining this part made me grin:
'Without realizing it, he held his head up straighter, his chest puffed out slightly, his legs slightly parted on the seat. He was glad McCoy wasn’t there to pick up on Logan’s own rutting scent.'

Great work, can't wait to read the next chapters! :D

Author's Response: Thank you. When I read the comics a long time ago, I feel there was more of an emphasis on the senses, not just the claws. I appreciate all feedback, positive or negative. -Killjoy