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Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2010 3:20:49 PM Title: 8 Haiku

'Bet your arms feel like home.' If that's a typo --should it have been 'But'? -- don't fix it. This is so much better, like she's still anticipating their first embrace. Maybe Freud had something with the 'slip' of his? --Wendie

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2007 9:20:12 PM Title: 8 Haiku

"Bobby Drake? Oh, please.
Compared to my Wolverine
Iceman leaves me cold."

Yes! That is what we are all thinking! Really good bit of poetry here. Very impressed.


Author's Response: Thanks. It was the obvious pun, but fun anyway. -Killjoy

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