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Reviewer: Joanne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2007 11:19:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

SO much to say in such a small space....

First, the characters I love Logan as the security guard, he's just so easy to picture like this. A caring gentle man, a person who has his secrets but does what he believes is the best thing for everyone (including the kid who needed shelter and food)
Also the way you gave them a break between meeting again, Marie all 'settled' when she really wasn't. The way she's found out that the leader of the so called sainted 'X-Men' isn't good. 'Collateral damage' is a phrase I've hated ever since the Falklands War, my brother just missed being sent there, he went to Northern Ireland instead, no better but at least his body would have been closer to bury.

You've really got me hooked with this, I hope you'll carry on and get some payback for Kitty and her baby.

Second, the development of Xavier's little world, has anyone else ever spoken out against him? *Have* people disappeared and Logan knows about it? What does he have to do with Xavier and everyone else there, do they know about him?

Thanks for sharing this and can we have a new update soon?

Author's Response: Logan's a cop, not security. Easy to get those two mixed up in this one. Should have make it clearer in the beginning. :) Don't know if Logan knows anything yet. I'll be updating this as soon as I have something written. Thanks for the fb! :)

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