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Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2012 9:38:44 PM Title: Two X-couples In Line At the Grocery Store

I love the funny, little one-liners you write in. Hehe:

Logan: And why does it have to be a guy?
Marie: I don’t know, it just is.
Logan: Well, I don’t like how it talks to you.
Marie: *turns away from scanner* For the love of God Logan! It’s a machine!
“Automated Voice”: Please scan you next item. By the way, you look hot today Rogue.
Logan and Marie (stunned): WHAT?!
Scott: Gotcha’!

Reviewer: Lorna Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2010 9:39:52 AM Title: Two X-couples In Line At the Grocery Store

Poor Logan, totally confused :)

Reviewer: Rogue1189 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2009 4:38:01 PM Title: Two X-couples In Line At the Grocery Store

OMG Scott saying that was amazing!!

hahahahahahahahahaha ^__^

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2007 10:22:26 AM Title: Two X-couples In Line At the Grocery Store

hahaha - loved Jean kissing Scott because he break the rules...in a grocery store! And what a little player he is, screwing with Logan like that. So I guess I agree with Jean - he's only fun when he's playing. *g*

And Logan getting jealous of the voice at the grocery store! Although I have to share my experiences - I've only ever heard female voices at self checkouts. Sad. Or from now on, I'd be imagining Scott.

Author's Response: i sorta changed things... it usually is a female ;)

Reviewer: Deb Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2007 10:13:01 PM Title: Two X-couples In Line At the Grocery Store

HA HA! I hate those things, they kinda creep me out but also shows how lazy we're getting.

Author's Response: its actually harder, you have to do everything yourself. And I *am* lazy... lay_z

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2007 4:22:31 AM Title: Two X-couples In Line At the Grocery Store

Hahahahahahahahahahahaha good that Logan was stunned enough to not skewer the scanner.

Author's Response: or to skewer scott!

Reviewer: September Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2007 3:58:22 AM Title: Two X-couples In Line At the Grocery Store

Catching up on my fic reading - just read this and the laundry one - LMAO!! I love your Jean and Scott...I mean, I love your Logan and Rogue too, but your Jean and Scott...and Logan's reaction to them, they make these fics. They're brilliant *g*!

"Jean: God, I love it when you break the rules! *kisses Scott madly*

Logan and Marie: … *crickets chirp in the distance*"

LMAO! I could just see their expression! So much fun!

Author's Response: i had to do the cricket thing... i just kept hearing it ;)

Reviewer: sharonmjl47 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2007 3:33:57 AM Title: Two X-couples In Line At the Grocery Store

Logan: Well, I don’t like how it talks to you.

Would he like how anyone talks to her? Dont think so!!
I love this series, it cracks me up!

Author's Response: exactly... even if it was that automated message service-hmmm... *scribbles down idea for another fic*- he wouldn't like it.

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2007 2:35:46 AM Title: Two X-couples In Line At the Grocery Store

I hate those talking automatic things, too! But Scooter's little zinger at the end? Priceless!

Author's Response: it was my favorite part as well;)

Reviewer: Azurevault Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2007 11:40:35 PM Title: Two X-couples In Line At the Grocery Store

bwahahahaha... omg, scott is awesome with his hare-brained attempts at humor. imitating the snuggle bear and the auto-cashier have to be up there at the top. oh, sigh... scott. uh, i mean, logan.. *ahem*, of course logan... *looks around guiltily*

Author's Response: scott is meant to be funny, cuz i mean, i tortured him in the last few of these that i wrote ;)

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