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Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2007 11:37:34 AM Title: He Closes Yet Another Door

That's what I like about this one - its particularity, its ambiguity.

Usually, while I waited, I’d wonder what he was thinking about.

That night I didn’t have to…

And he never gave me the signal.


Because this time they don't have to speak because she knows already. And perhaps this time, he really should but doesn't. And the audience doesn't know what it's all about, but we've got a picture with the Miracle Gro lawn and the night and cigar smoke, and the fact that she's been silent there a few minutes, expecting him to know she's there but never calling herself to attention.

Sometimes life is about those moments. I get a full visual image with this fic, as beating as a painting.

Author's Response: woah! thanks, i kinda learned something about my poem just then.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2007 5:19:05 AM Title: He Closes Yet Another Door

Damn sad... good one though!

Author's Response: yes it is sad... but it just kept knocking round' my head.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 10:53:11 PM Title: He Closes Yet Another Door

Yes, you should apologize; it was very well mannered of you to do so before hand. And no, it didn't really have to get written, now did it?? *Short* and *sweet* go together for a reason...short and angsty just doesn't have quite the same ring.

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