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Reviewer: tinuvielstragedy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2007 1:50:42 AM Title: A Force Unseen

this was pretty good. you misspelled "practice" and used the wrong "there" when the Professor had his first sentence. I really like how you said Rogue was a favourite of the mansion's. adds something extra to the betrayal.

Author's Response: Yep I definitely need a beta, thing is I'm so damn lazy, I write a chapter and proof read it quickly. Thing with writing angst is it leaves you drained, and usually I'm too tired to pick up on the spelling mistakes. Usually leave it up to spell checker but that lets you down as well sometimes, usually with words that can be spelt either way, *practice* and *there* or *their*. I am a stickler for grammar and try to get it right, but LOL thanks as ever for the heads up and the review. I figured Rogue would be a favourite, sort of like that gruff exterior endears her to everybody even when she doesn't try. But as for betrayal the X-men haven't seen anything yet... LOL :)

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 4:24:07 PM Title: A Force Unseen

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Author's Response: LOL

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 9:25:59 AM Title: A Force Unseen

Jeeze this chapter made me want to cry. I feel terrible for Logan. And even worse for Rogue and she didn't even make an appearence in this chapter. I am so angry at Scott, Bobby and Xavier. I love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: LOL, glad ya like it. Poor Rogue the other X-men have certainly made a habit of messing her around. And poor Logan as well, to be so close to finally telling her how he felt only to be just too late :( But not too worry, he's gonna find a way to make it up to her, he's got to!

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