hey there
I've read all of your story
I've enjoyed it very much
just one thing that compelled me to review this time
her name is Jubilation Lee, shortened to Jubilee.

keep writing. your work is very promising.

Author's Response: Right, damn can't remember how I got that wrong, sorta wrote this over a year ago, just got back into it and started posting here. Anyway glad you like the story and thanks for the heads-up! :p