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Reviewer: Deb Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2007 11:35:54 AM Title: Chapter 4

Logie! You better help Ara out, I would love an update again today :D

Author's Response: *Don't much like the way this one's heading. I'm not a nut job, you know... But what the heck. I'll see what I can do. Won't promise anything, I think that loony chick had some other plans for tonight.*

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2007 11:00:40 AM Title: Chapter 4

*looks confused*

Marie's flat... Ms Liberty... back in diner... I think I missed something *scratches head*



Author's Response: Scratch all you like. There's no much sense in this part alone. Latter parts will help to understand this little better. :)

Reviewer: Geeves Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2007 10:47:17 AM Title: Chapter 4

ok, i'm confused. so the first part was a dream? and didnt someone catch logan in her appartment. i am just confused

Author's Response: This part doesn't make much sense, but it isn't even supposed to. You'll get the hang of it soon enough. As soon as I have managed to wrangle out next parts from Logie. :)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2007 4:18:54 AM Title: Chapter 3

Ooooh very exciting and an evil cliffhanger!

Reviewer: soulless_lover Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 10:00:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

BWAHAHAHAHA!! Rogue, the human squid.

i totally love this. i love the conflicting "omg-don't-fucking-touch-me-but-stay-close-so-i-can-see-you-not-that-i-care-or-anything" feelings Logan's got going on here. i love that he's not being portrayed as some chivalrous hero, but more like a crabby, selfish old bastard who really DOESN'T like people... but seems to end up caring, whether he likes it or not, and for whatever reason.

fucking GENIUS.

Author's Response: Thank you. And thank you for putting your fics in the archive as well, got back all my old favorites. :)

Reviewer: soulless_lover Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 9:55:46 PM Title: Chapter 3

hey! where's the rest!? omg!

*pout*

(i'd forgotten just how much i love your stuff. totally missed you, dude. now gimme more!!)

:D

Author's Response: Logie is quite un-cooperative when it comes to this particular fic. Next chapter is almost finished, might be able to post it tonight.

Reviewer: Deb Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 5:49:21 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow is this like The Stepford Wives? I really hope Rogue isn't a robot! Glad you turned this into a full length story :D Or well at least longer then a chapter.

Author's Response: Stepford Wives? Haven't seen that one.

Reviewer: Geeves Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 4:13:04 PM Title: Chapter 3

oh yeah. i like where this is going. Marie got a mind wipe. Can we say POD PEOPLE

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 12:09:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

...Well, that I would call a cliffhanger. I don't like drone Marie, makes me sad :( He is gonna kill SOMEONE isn't he? I know it'd make me feel better...

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 10:26:10 AM Title: Chapter 2

Love the 'continuing episodes'!! So glad you decided to keep going. The memory loss is a good plot twist. One question...did whoever wipe her memory also turn off her skin??? You don't mention anything about her wearing gloves or anything?? Is Logan safe from her? Will giveing her her memory back activate her skin? C'mon! These are important questions, we gotta have the answers!

Author's Response: Everything will be revealed eventually. Even her skin.

Author's Response: And didn't that come out completely wrong? I meant that your questions will be answered eventually. Even the one concerning about her skin. :)

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 9:53:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good story, nice writing style, not real thrilled with Logan's attitude. But it's definitely 'altered' from what we usually see, that's for sure!

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 9:47:23 AM Title: Chapter 2

See! Ha, some where in that deeply paranoiaed head of his he had some kinda feelings towards her well being. If he was just worried about her sneaking up on him he could take her out and kill her now and no one would ever no. I'm glad you expaneded it, who swiped her??

Author's Response: *Paranoid? Me paranoid? Hey! It's not my fault that 'they're' following me around, sneaking up on me and trying to give me wedgies and...* Logie, shut up. Nobody wants to hear about little green men that are obsessed to your rear end. Seriously. Keep a lid on it. Okay?

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 8:53:59 AM Title: Chapter 2

Interesting, very interesting indeed!

Reviewer: Geeves Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 11:34:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

i feel so conflicted about this peice. well writen, as always, but i just feel...odd. i know this is how Logan would react and it would make sense for his running off at the end of X1 and Logan and Rogue's deterierating relationship thoughout X2 and X3. but in my heart of hearts i just want everyone to be happy. i agree with RouDeVil. it should be exspanded from a one shot. it leaves me wanting more, which you always have a way of doing to me so yes...make another chapter

Author's Response: It's under work. Have to beat it out from Logie first, but I'm getting there... :)

Reviewer: Deb Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 10:14:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Is it wrong that I laughed? Oh well I did! Good story :D

Author's Response: Wrong? No! There's quite a bit humor in this one. At least I think so.

Reviewer: Valeriusjka Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 2:28:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Now, this it's a diferent way to see their bond. I feel a little sad for Logan, he had obviously a very traumatic moment up on the statue and still has a hard time coming to terms with it.

I do enjoy your stories, but I think I mentioned that earlier. ;)

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 1:15:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yeah, this feels like it needs more, like its an openning to a bigger realization between the two. Either she finally accepts that he's not her firend or her hero, or he learns to lighten the hell up. But I love how real he is in this, he reacts to her skin the same way anyone else would, if slightly more intense from fear. But it makes me wonder why he plays along with her, even if it is gruf? Perhaps unconcsiously he knows its just is own paranoia and she doesn't deserve the backlas?

Author's Response: He has to play along. He doesn't want to get thrown out of Xavier's, and the last thing he wants is to let her in to how scared and vulnerable he actually is.

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