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Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 4:12:28 AM Title: Chapter 8

Oooooohh, I see now, (maybe!)
"...I start trembling like a leaf from a thought of her touch!" Uh-huh, yeah, several ideas now come to mind about what he needs to find; or face? A little something our furry hero needs to come to grips with?
Hhhrrrmph! Looks like White Dove beat me to the punch again!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2007 8:56:39 AM Title: Chapter 7

Ok I am thinking this is more than just about Marie's skin. It feels to me like Logan is actually afraid of letting her close emotionally and is unconsciously projecting that into his overwhelming fear of her skin. That make any sense? LOL Anyway I am enjoying this story a lot.

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2007 8:21:34 AM Title: Chapter 7

Still quite confused, and admittedly, I have been confused so long now that I tire a little of it. But perhaps it's not quite a taxing when you read the story in one go. Not sure.

Love this Logan - he's not the one from the films, but a very credible loony.

"Okay. That went really well. As soon as she stops crying I can toss her out."
Yes, THIS is what makes a badass in my book, not a dirty wife-beater! Great!

And Marie is indeed a decent girl who knows no better or worse than to treat Logan like he was a decent friend, as well, in the face of all evidence to the contrary. Makes it interesting to watch.

Interesting also how shrewd an observer Logan is, especially in the one glimpse we get of Marie and Bobby - quite real, that.

Hmm... Perhaps the Professor is projecting here, worried out of his head about where this not-quite-relationship between Logan and Rogue might go? ;-)


Author's Response: This is confusing story. As confusing as the name of it hints. Confusing to write as well, because Logan in this one isn't my usual overprotective-in-love-with-Marie-will-die-for-her -Logan. In a way this is an outlet for me and Logie. When ever it starts to feel that my fics are getting too sugary and Logie too goggly-eyed all I have to do is to return, read this through and write some more. Helps me to focus. And thank you, you have given me some new ideas for this one with your fb. :)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2007 6:52:14 AM Title: Chapter 7

Dreams heh so if not Marie and not Logan... maybe Wolvie doing the dreaming ;)

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2007 6:12:54 AM Title: Chapter 7

ooooo..dreams.. Are the dreams seperate from the Xavier screwing?

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2007 4:28:53 PM Title: Chapter 6

Hmmm things are getting clearer... I'm not totally confused anymore ;)

Reviewer: crazy4israel Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2007 7:44:22 AM Title: Chapter 6

Whoa!! Crazy, crazy goings on. I love it. I was very confused there for a while. But I'm figuring it out as you reveal more of the story. I can't wait to see how it turns out.

Author's Response: Thanks. You're not the only one confused. :)

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2007 6:54:41 AM Title: Chapter 6

I have a question that just sort of popped into my head. And if it isn't even relevent to this fic at all I apologize. I see how he is scared of her from the 'stabbing through the chest' scene, because she took from him. But then why purposely heal her at the statue? He knew her power by then. Again, just wondering, feel free to tell me to hush and just read :)

Author's Response: That's something I have been thinking. He was scared at the statue, too, but there really was no other choice. That's my guess. Of course rest of the movies were kind of letdown after that, seeing that you do not give your life for total stranger you don't even care that much. This is kind of related to this fic. Quite a lot related. I got my idea for this when I was thinking about differencies in those two scenes (bedroom and the statue).

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2007 3:35:12 PM Title: Chapter 6

Ok, points to White Dove for being smarter than the rest of us [read: ME!] And, ok, so the Prof was trying to help out...but what's with the evil twin??? Did the transporter have a malfunction, Mr. Scott???

Author's Response: Beam me up, Scotty! Heh. Malfunction indeed. Something completely unrelated to our good professor Xavier. And it looks like I lied earlier. This is going to take few more than just couple of chappies before I can end this, but we're getting there. All will be revealed in due time.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2007 1:03:35 PM Title: Chapter 6

...Well now I'm just confused again. I'm sorry to say this but at first I thought your Logan was real, understandable, but I'm gonna say it. Now I just think he's fucked up. I know, he has every right to be, but he's serious fucked three ways from tuesday. Personally, I think Marie should drain the hell out of his ass and really give him something to be scared of :)

Author's Response: I never claimed that he was sane in this one...

Reviewer: Deb Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2007 12:45:41 PM Title: Chapter 6

Ow my brain hurts from trying to figure this out!

Do I have the right to say that Professor Xavier seems like a right arse in this story? Sure seems like it!

Stop messing with Logie's mind Wheels :(

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2007 12:22:43 PM Title: Chapter 6

ok confused here.... So Logan is scared of Rogue after the statue thing and the professor put him in some holoprogram to help him?

Author's Response: Exactly. But it didn't work as dear prof thought it would.

Reviewer: Geeves Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2007 12:03:34 PM Title: Chapter 6

god i fucking hate logan in this fic. i love the story to peices cause it is such a mind fuck. so that was all a simulation? oh jebus. poor marie

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2007 8:38:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

Yes, at last a completely not-likeable, credible, REAL Logan; great!!!
And a teenager with a crush is a freakin'g pain in the neck, absolutely!
His voice comes across just right, and you are suitably circumspect in leaving hints that all is not quite as he says it is. Great!

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2007 2:11:10 AM Title: Chapter 5

*frown* Okay, now I'm thoroughly confused, but damn, it's entertaining.

Reviewer: Geeves Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 1:28:04 PM Title: Chapter 5

damnit Ara, can't you see what you're doing to us. ok...not about Marie. all about Logan. Xavier's involved and some weird 12 days before christmas DE Via Vu thing goin on. what, is he suppose to relive the day until he gets it right?

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 1:18:47 PM Title: Chapter 5

I'm at least as confused as Logan is...

Reviewer: Deb Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 12:58:12 PM Title: Chapter 5

Whoa! That was damn good, now everything is starting to make more sense. Poor Logie! I'd be so confused.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 12:38:56 PM Title: Chapter 5

I got it! Xavier needed more money so he thought he'd monoplogize on Logan damn fine looks and make a movie. Except he knew Logan wouldn't go for it, so he's making him think he is ACTUALLY in a horror film to get those genuine, beautiful, growly reactions out of him. I'm right, aren't I??? Score!

Author's Response: *Christ! It's my life you're talking about! Ara wouldn't do that to me. Not after our little deal...*

Author's Response: And this is just a fic. Not a riddle. I'll post last chapters as soon as I have them finished.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 12:18:40 PM Title: Chapter 5

Vague much? I will figure this fic out! It's my new mission, have this thing all plotted out in my head for my professor shuts up about... whatever it is he's talking about. I will! Xavier...Logan...hm...

Author's Response: Sorry. Ending is quite simple, and I would spoil it completely if I revealed more.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 11:18:06 AM Title: Chapter 5

Okay, so am I right? Is it Xavier screwing with him? Because other wise I'm stumped...Or, let's see..hmm... nope, that's all I got.

Author's Response: Yes. Xavier is involved.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 11:14:14 AM Title: Chapter 5

I don't like cryptic, ara!!! 'find and rescue something else'??? Just what the heck izzat suppose to mean?? Will you at least reveal how many chapters this sucker's gonna be? I kinda need to plan my days around my torture!

Author's Response: Uhh... I have no idea how many chapters probably couple more. And this fic isn't about Marie. This fic is entirely about Logan. He just hasn't noticed it yet. That's all I can say. Sorry.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 10:48:54 AM Title: Chapter 5

*scratches head, raises hand-waits patiently to be called on*

Uh, 'scuse me, ara? Um, still confused here. You got a map, a cheat sheet or a book of cliff notes for this puppy?? 'Cause, um, I'm a college grad and all but I'm having a real hard time following this. How 'bout you puttin' down a trail of breadcrumbs or something? Please? At this point anything would help!



Author's Response: No travel plan, sorry. Only thing I know is the destination, and that one I won't reveal yet. But let me give you a hint. This isn't a fic where Logan's supposed to find and rescue Marie. He's supposed to find and rescue something else.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2007 4:19:58 PM Title: Chapter 4

Ooooooo-kaaaayyyy...what the heck is goin' on here? He can't stand her, she leaves-can't be found, he finds her and is suddently worried, she don't remember crud, he does a little B&E and gets sucked thru the walls by an unknown boogey-somethin'? Then they're back on top of the Lady Liberty, THEN back at some weirded out-step one from when he found her but her name is right this time??

Lucy!! You gots some 'splainin' ta do!!

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2007 1:00:59 PM Title: Chapter 4

Aw, is Xavier fucking around with poor Logan's head? That probably isn't a good idea if he's like thousand feet up on the Statue of Liberty... Poor Wolvie has every right to be paranoid.

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