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Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 9:22:12 AM Title: Chapter 11

Conversations are still getting better and better. Great how your Logan swings around for Marie, but just for her.
Glad also not to get too many vociferous professions of complete trust here - after all, Mom does have a point here: “And all that just out of goodness of his heart?”

Perfectly wonderful how we get a lot of explanation for Marie's behaviour in passing: "I know him probably better than he knows himself. He’s a good man."

She does quite a lot of "let's just not talk about it", though, isn't she? That will have to be addressed some time, darlin', take it from me!

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 10:47:02 PM Title: Chapter 11

Uh, yeah, count me in with Rou - definitely stab mommy dearest! At least enough to shut her up for 5-10 minutes.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 3:49:32 PM Title: Chapter 11

Please tell me he stabs the mother. It doesn't have to be fatal.... Props for the rapid updates, somebody took their vitamins today :D

Author's Response: When ever Logie's in the mood, things get done. Today he was feeling especially antsy. I might be able to squeeze out one more chappie little later.

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