Reviews For Altered Vision
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Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 8:58:39 AM Title: Chapter 8

Good idea, Logan. Wolverine, heal thyself. Not sure about what he implies with this: '“Don’t worry. You’ll like it…” At least if your earlier behavior is any indication, you’ll like it a lot.'
Looks like sexual innuendo, which wouldn't make much sense to me here.

This sentence, I don't really get at all: 'I’m sure she doesn’t think of you any less of a man.'

And oh, look, he's training himself almost into a civilised human being, giving her a fair warning! And it's about time that he faces that something's wrong with him, and what that is - very typical that he then, after rather a lot of denial and mulling things over, needs only a very short step into action.

Reviewer: soulless_lover Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2007 3:09:23 AM Title: Chapter 8

*rubs hands together evilly*

still loving you.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 4:12:28 AM Title: Chapter 8

Oooooohh, I see now, (maybe!)
"...I start trembling like a leaf from a thought of her touch!" Uh-huh, yeah, several ideas now come to mind about what he needs to find; or face? A little something our furry hero needs to come to grips with?
Hhhrrrmph! Looks like White Dove beat me to the punch again!

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