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Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2008 7:57:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

Im afraid that I must insist that you complete this story immediately or I shall cry... do you really want that... do you huh, DO YOU!!!

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 1:03:32 PM Title: Chapter 16

Okay, deep breathe.... AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! Can't wait to see what happens when Xavier finally frees him of the mind games. Personally I think he should get very far away from him, too much screwing around with 'fragile equipment'.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 11:51:21 AM Title: Chapter 16

Oh Yeah!! Big ol' gold star for Rogue!! Xavier and his blasted 'it would be the best for all involved' shpeil...bull crap! Anybody with 2 grey cells to rub together should know better than to go messin' with the swiss cheese that is Logan's head! C'mon Xavey...get a clue fer cryin' out loud!

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 10:46:29 AM Title: Chapter 14

*doffs hat to ct xfan*
Didn't see it until the start of this chapter.

And for a moment I thought: "What if it's not about Logan at all, but about Marie? What if this Logan is really just the one she's keeping in her head, like kids who make up a 'friend' when they are lonely?"

But you did say at the beginning that this was about Logan and only Logan.

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 9:30:16 AM Title: Chapter 12

And a greatly matured Marie who is strong enough to be sassy even in this highly entertaining triangle. Very satisfactory.

Nice touch how we learn more about Logan - his voice is less guarded now than it was.
BUT though he is also a little less grumpy in that he says less what he thinks, he's also started to say quite a lot of things he doesn't think/mean. That way lies another messing-up of relationships, Logan.

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 9:22:12 AM Title: Chapter 11

Conversations are still getting better and better. Great how your Logan swings around for Marie, but just for her.
Glad also not to get too many vociferous professions of complete trust here - after all, Mom does have a point here: “And all that just out of goodness of his heart?”

Perfectly wonderful how we get a lot of explanation for Marie's behaviour in passing: "I know him probably better than he knows himself. He’s a good man."

She does quite a lot of "let's just not talk about it", though, isn't she? That will have to be addressed some time, darlin', take it from me!

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 9:13:59 AM Title: Chapter 10

Love the exchanges in this one:
“You know I’m not even supposed to be here, right?”
“I don’t really care. Get drunk, kid. I’ll make sure you get home.”
He's getting better at the friend part.

“Didn’t I tell you to sit back there?”
“I couldn’t see from there.” Fuck. That kind of was the idea.
But it's difficult, isn't it Logan, what with having no experience and a rather sassy charge to take care of?

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 9:05:33 AM Title: Chapter 9

(I missed a BUSLOAD of posts" Damn!!!)

Yeah, spring right into action without further consideration. Oh dear. Obviously, nobody has ever told Logan that some things become only real after someone speaks them aloud. With a friend like this, who needs enemies?

Very slyly done, this introduction of a changing attitude. "Wear some clothes, woman!" Hmm, slowly moving out of the pedophile region here, aren't we?

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 8:58:39 AM Title: Chapter 8

Good idea, Logan. Wolverine, heal thyself. Not sure about what he implies with this: '“Don’t worry. You’ll like it…” At least if your earlier behavior is any indication, you’ll like it a lot.'
Looks like sexual innuendo, which wouldn't make much sense to me here.

This sentence, I don't really get at all: 'I’m sure she doesn’t think of you any less of a man.'

And oh, look, he's training himself almost into a civilised human being, giving her a fair warning! And it's about time that he faces that something's wrong with him, and what that is - very typical that he then, after rather a lot of denial and mulling things over, needs only a very short step into action.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2007 9:02:56 PM Title: Chapter 14

Sorry, ara, truth be told, saw that one comin'! But I can't wait to see what you do with it now that they're face to face!

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2007 4:09:17 PM Title: Chapter 15

Heh, funny AND twisted, my favorite combination. So is Prof. making him go down memory lane I'm guessing? Geez, he really wants them two to be together. Poor Logan. You're spoiling me with updates again, Yay! :D

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2007 12:59:00 PM Title: Chapter 14

Well now you're just fucking with my head! :P I'm so confused...

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2007 10:13:00 AM Title: Chapter 13

Oh my, it's like you're starting this story all over again, love it! I know we all want to know the answer to those questions too! More please. :D

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2007 10:07:01 AM Title: Chapter 13

OKay!! Now that's the pain the ass Logan I've come to love and be annoyed by in this fic!! I was beginning to worry, what with the pansy-assed 'yeah I'll go with you to your daddy's funeral, nobody should have to got thru that shit alone...' crap!

Hope you gets this shit figured out soon, Logan, you're not the only one you're giving a headache to!!

Reviewer: soulless_lover Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2007 3:29:38 AM Title: Chapter 12

what? that's IT???

*tries to coax the Logan muse into telling you more of this story by dangling imported Canadian whiskey and Kate the weather girl in front of him*

Author's Response: *I'll take that chick, thank you...* No, you're not taking Kate, Logie. We have job to do.

Reviewer: soulless_lover Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2007 3:21:04 AM Title: Chapter 10

first: Logan thinking vicious thoughts about Marie's widowed mother's coffee? fucking. PRICELESS.

second: OMGZ!! *runs to next chapter*

Reviewer: soulless_lover Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2007 3:15:06 AM Title: Chapter 9

ohhh, Logan, Logan, Logan.

stitching your mouth shut will not help.

pssst... you're secretly a great big squishy teddy bear. you just HAPPEN to look like a grizzly.

don't worry, i won't tell a soul.

Reviewer: soulless_lover Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2007 3:09:23 AM Title: Chapter 8

*rubs hands together evilly*

still loving you.

Reviewer: soulless_lover Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2007 3:05:48 AM Title: Chapter 7

oh, poor messed up Logan. "I don't want snot all over my shirt!" BWAHAHAHAHA!

i totally love this fic. and you.

Reviewer: soulless_lover Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2007 3:01:16 AM Title: Chapter 6

catching up....

before i dash off to read the other squillion parts i haven't read yet, can i just say... i totally laughed at Logan's "Bright light, bright light!"

i kept seeing Gizmo from "Gremlins" in my head.

hmmm.... i wonder if there'll be a bunch of Logans if we throw water on him. shall we try it? ;D

Author's Response: That's where it came from! I was sure I had heard it somewhere before, but I wasn't sure where. Hmm... Maybe I'll borrow my kid's super soaker and conduct a little experiment. Logiee... Oh, Logiee. Come out, come out where ever you are... :)

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 10:47:02 PM Title: Chapter 11

Uh, yeah, count me in with Rou - definitely stab mommy dearest! At least enough to shut her up for 5-10 minutes.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 6:01:59 PM Title: Chapter 9

Whoa. There. Just one. Second! Where the heck is the over dub of a narrator announcing to the viewing/reading audience that due to illness, an emergency, hell a decapitation(!) the role of Logan will now be played by so-and-so??

Because this is so not the Logan that's been jumping outta his skin whenever Marie is on the same floor of the mansion as him, let alone in the same room!!

What are you doing, ara?? I was just gettin' used to him being an ass, and now ya go and turn him goody-goody?? Grrrrrr!!

Author's Response: Don't worry, he'll get back on track soon enough... :) Remember, he doesn't hate Marie. He's just afraid of her.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 3:49:32 PM Title: Chapter 11

Please tell me he stabs the mother. It doesn't have to be fatal.... Props for the rapid updates, somebody took their vitamins today :D

Author's Response: When ever Logie's in the mood, things get done. Today he was feeling especially antsy. I might be able to squeeze out one more chappie little later.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 12:36:36 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loved this chap! Will there be a Wolverine vs. Rednecks round 2? Maybe Marie could help out.... :)

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 9:14:58 AM Title: Chapter 9

Well this is taking an interesting turn. And I'm liking it :) I love how he is like fighting his little 'Marie'-phobia and little bit more. I'm guessing the dreams were Bobby's? Or, um...having Logan fantantasies...I dunno, they could have been mine *g* Can't wait to see how the trip home is gonna play out!

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