I've read this kind of scenario before, but the clarity with which you write his nightmares, the aching unsteadiness with which you describe his pain makes it yours. And I also love that you don't push the boundaries too far in this one. It's all about them being tentative with each other, taking small steps, oh-so-tiny steps towards what they want to be. She feels like she can comfort him more than this.

You write some great dark stuff, rawrave. I dig it. :) But in this one, what I love is the connection. It adds a bit of bright.

Author's Response: Glad you like it, the nightmares will get worse, and I guess both of them are gonna suffer before some sort of end. Marie's taking a hell of a risk walking into Logan's mind, it's the one place he has the least control over Wolverine... LOL :)

That's a wonderful, strangely quiet one - it may well stand on its own (sorry AAngel! ;-).
Logan seems darker than usually; he reminds me more of comicverse Logan, and Rogue, depending how you write her, might be more mature and quietly... hmm... stalwart?
Would love to see it continue, would greatly prefer to see it continue unmolested by smut and romance (if I may be so bold as to interfere with the ideas you doubtlessly have ;-).

Author's Response: Rogue is infinitely more mature in this fic, she has to be especially if she's gonna delve into the hell that is Logan's mind. No smut in this fic, as for romance well maybe towards the very end perhaps. Its more of an exploration in seeing Logan and Wolverine as two seperate identities, and Rogue having to figure out exactly why the animal in Logan wants to kill him. I wanted to creat a past for Logan, as a man with a pst, maybe even a family... Anyway thanks for the review LOL :)