Reviews For Memory of Bruises
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Reviewer: RedLotus Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2014 9:32:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved this story! I'm marking it as one of my favorites. So much in just 3 chapters! I really like the way we see Logan's thought process and the way things transitioned from beginning to end. Even though he was kind of a bastard, especially when he had the nerve to get jealous and possessive, it was still hot. I like my characters flawed, and the way you wrote Logan and Marie was awesome to read. And the end? Beautiful and perfect and believable. Loved!! A great, well-crafted story.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2013 4:46:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

I simply ADORE how you turned it all around!!  Made Logan realize he'd be in the exact same position had Jean lived. That Marie's feelings are that much more intense because she's willing to endure the hurt for the moments she can steal and almost fool herself over. I could actually SEE it click in his head!!  Wonderful job, just wonderful!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the very kind feedback! Much appreciated. :o)

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2012 8:43:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Man, what a bastard. He's gonna regret it, though... Oooh, Logan can't stay away from Marie. Who does he think he's fooling?

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2011 9:28:08 AM Title: Chapter 3

It's interesting how people interpret things. I didn't get the feeling that he was lying to her at the end at all unlike some other reviewers. I really feel that this is an awesome happy ending. Thanks again for sharing this!

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2011 9:23:28 AM Title: Chapter 3

I really loved this! You did a great job conveying Logan's thoughts and how he finally worked out his true feelings for Jean and Marie. And the ending was perfect!

Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2009 4:08:32 AM Title: Chapter 3

somehow i think Logan is just saying the I love you only to make her stay.

Reviewer: hannya Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 9:47:45 PM Title: Chapter 3

“Darlin’, look at me. I love you. I love you.”

Liar.

Reviewer: UKTara Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2007 2:45:12 PM Title: Chapter 3

Ooooh this was great with a lovely ending! And very realistic in the way that Logan is thinking and acting, if that makes sense. :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so. Logan can be difficult to write, but he's worth it!

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2007 4:54:07 AM Title: Chapter 3

Woohoo! I love this 3-chapter story - so much intensity, lust, grief, and a happy ending, all tied up so tightly. Great work!

Author's Response: Thank you kindly! :o)

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2007 4:36:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

Woah! I love nasty Marie! She really knows how to deliver a punch to his emotional gut. Gotta read the rest now, before I blow a gasket.

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2007 10:55:56 PM Title: Chapter 2

Storm, you skanky cow! :-P Although, who can blame her for trying. *sigh*
LOVE the jealous Logan!

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2007 10:54:55 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh, hooray for a wonderful ending!!

Author's Response: Thanks. I don't seem to do unhappy endings for some reason!

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2007 10:43:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

What a Bastard!!! (P.S. Love your writing!)

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2007 10:21:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Still a favorite of mine, Bex. And what's more I admire so much how you create intensity and emotion with so little, the bare mention of words.

And I especially love that you give us characters that aren't perfect, who sometimes make mistakes, who hurt themselves and others and take chances. But you manage to make us root for them anyway. ;) well done.

Author's Response: Wow! *blushes* Thanks for such positive feedback.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2007 2:50:31 PM Title: Chapter 3

Ok I was all set to hate logan. In fact after chapters 1 and 2 i did but then I read chapter 3 and I loved him agian. Nothing better than a confused and scared Logan. Unless its a jealous Logan. LOL Great story. I really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: I quite hated Logan in the first chapter, the poor messed-up sucker. But I LOVE jealous Logan too!

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