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Loved this story! I'm marking it as one of my favorites. So much in just 3 chapters! I really like the way we see Logan's thought process and the way things transitioned from beginning to end. Even though he was kind of a bastard, especially when he had the nerve to get jealous and possessive, it was still hot. I like my characters flawed, and the way you wrote Logan and Marie was awesome to read. And the end? Beautiful and perfect and believable. Loved!! A great, well-crafted story.
I simply ADORE how you turned it all around!! Made Logan realize he'd be in the exact same position had Jean lived. That Marie's feelings are that much more intense because she's willing to endure the hurt for the moments she can steal and almost fool herself over. I could actually SEE it click in his head!! Wonderful job, just wonderful!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the very kind feedback! Much appreciated. :o)
Man, what a bastard. He's gonna regret it, though... Oooh, Logan can't stay away from Marie. Who does he think he's fooling?
It's interesting how people interpret things. I didn't get the feeling that he was lying to her at the end at all unlike some other reviewers. I really feel that this is an awesome happy ending. Thanks again for sharing this!
I really loved this! You did a great job conveying Logan's thoughts and how he finally worked out his true feelings for Jean and Marie. And the ending was perfect!
somehow i think Logan is just saying the I love you only to make her stay.
“Darlin’, look at me. I love you. I love you.”
Liar.
Ooooh this was great with a lovely ending! And very realistic in the way that Logan is thinking and acting, if that makes sense. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so. Logan can be difficult to write, but he's worth it!
Woohoo! I love this 3-chapter story - so much intensity, lust, grief, and a happy ending, all tied up so tightly. Great work!
Author's Response: Thank you kindly! :o)
Woah! I love nasty Marie! She really knows how to deliver a punch to his emotional gut. Gotta read the rest now, before I blow a gasket.
Storm, you skanky cow! :-P Although, who can blame her for trying. *sigh*
LOVE the jealous Logan!
Oh, hooray for a wonderful ending!!
Author's Response: Thanks. I don't seem to do unhappy endings for some reason!
What a Bastard!!! (P.S. Love your writing!)
Still a favorite of mine, Bex. And what's more I admire so much how you create intensity and emotion with so little, the bare mention of words.
And I especially love that you give us characters that aren't perfect, who sometimes make mistakes, who hurt themselves and others and take chances. But you manage to make us root for them anyway. ;) well done.
Author's Response: Wow! *blushes* Thanks for such positive feedback.
Ok I was all set to hate logan. In fact after chapters 1 and 2 i did but then I read chapter 3 and I loved him agian. Nothing better than a confused and scared Logan. Unless its a jealous Logan. LOL Great story. I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: I quite hated Logan in the first chapter, the poor messed-up sucker. But I LOVE jealous Logan too!